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Thanks for posting these all in one place Atari! Better than digging through Wreckshop’s site (R.I.P.)! I never noticed it before, but it’s a nice detail that with the three girls, the larger they are, the less veins are apparent. Cheers!

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He’s smoking this drug that’s really prevalent on the internet. It’s called "troll."

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As per the previous trollish post about this story being pedantic, I thought it might be worth my ranting time to note on the lexicology of trolls as exhibited in this circumstance..

def. Pedantic

"Characterized by a narrow, often ostentatious concern for book learning and formal rules: a pedantic attention to details."

So this text, a growth story, is very concerned with book learning? At the risk of being pedantic, perhaps the words you were looking for troll, were "verbose" or "grandiloquent" Also interesting to note that "pedantic" itself is such an obscure word that anyone that uses it is self-incriminating, so to speak.

Bravo on the story Pimp! Bravo!!

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I concur. These girls could also do with an H stamped on their foreheads, but not for hologram…..

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My god man! You’ve outdone yourself. That first one. It’s among the best muscle morphs I’ve yet seen. I almost have to write a story about it or something. NNNNGH (sound of biting on thumb)

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Great story praetorian. I’m definitely becoming a fan of your work. Do you have your stories compiled anywhere yet?

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Yeah, I concur. Nice story praetorian. Prae may I ask what the hell your name stands for? I’ve never read any of your prose before (or have I? and just not known it), but it was good. Good.

Ideas for a sequel? A "visit" to the lady doctor’s office? In which the good virus is spread instead of cured? This is unimaginative though. Maybe a prequel, in Africa, describing the origins of the virus, with the foxy tribal ladies reversing tribal roles with their growth. This hasn’t been done yet, at least, that I can remember. Doctor’s office, psh, who hasn’t been there?

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Hey man, excellent story, the first of yours I’ve seen. The breast growth and height growth scenes were really hot, and it’s never a bad move to add the possibility of more growth to the end of it. thanks!

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It’s good!

does she look oriental though? Ambigously ethnic, undeniably female 😉

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I ‘gree. Your style is odd, but I hereby deem it "fresh."

Good to see some "post-modern" growth fiction.

Punch-on, Pynchon!!

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