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I will concede that the shifts in the point of view are coming rather rapidly for my taste,, but I like the way the storyline is progressing. I definitely like the feeling that there are multiple peoples plans coming together, it's just that the shifts are so fast that I can't see where some of it is going.

Looks interesting though – awaiting more of course –

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do you have a link  😀

"Link? Link? I know of no link."

"Amazon, rip his arms off."

"Oh – you mean THIS link."

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I rather like "The Experiment" as well – Yay to women winning on brains, looks *and* brawn.

Just leave me with enough smarts to try and lead the counter-revolution too –

Okay. I, uh, really suck at being submissive.

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Yeah, by and large I'm not into emasculization (SP?)  – I would prefer the women be perfectly capable of dominating and seducing men at the top of their form – . However I can live with it in otherwise good writing, which is fortunate as most of my favorite writers do prefer some variant of shrinking, infantilism, or feminization.

Just one more of those sad things I'll have to live with till my eventual control of absolute power – .

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Yeah – it reads well, though I'm not quite sure I like the perspective jumping that much (Wait-a-minnit, who's beating up her husband, I thought she was the one who was working in the lab, no wait thats so and so . . .)

but the writing itself in good and the interleaving seems to be pulling the stories together as a whole, so I think it'll come out well.

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Just came across "Stewy" at the Giantess Magic on the storyboard, which is a fun combo of FMG and Tease. And had somehow not mentioned Greapos before now.

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Just a couple notations, from the perspective of someone that reads far more than he writes.

First – yeah, some people hate longs stories. On the other hand, some of us really like them. A long story generally has more plot and development, and you can flesh out stuff more. Sex stories are fun, but I prefer something longer most of the time.

Proofreading – Yeah, you'll catch ten errors proofreading stuff. You're roomie, so, sister, will catch twenty in the same timeframe. Generally better to trade off with someone else – it helps both of you more.

Paragraph length – best advice on that I've ever heard is simply to be sure that you've *decided* to make a paragraph long, or short – don't just leave it either way. A paragraph normally covers one idea or interaction – if it takes 10 sentences to cover that interaction, so be it, and vice versa if it takes 1 sentence, but don't arbitrarily shorten a paragraph to fit a specific size.

That's just my quick thoughts

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Not a bad summary of the IP issues involving Fanfiction.

Something I used on an old site I used to update was a disclaimer you had to check that said (Paraphrased) "Use of the links on this site signifies accepting this agreement that all stories accessible from here are eligible for protection under the parody exception of U.S. copyright law or equivalent local laws. Bypassing the cookie marking your acceptance of this disclaimer shall be considered a violation of an electronis means of protection as circumscribed by the U.S DMCA statute and pursued appropriately.

I don't know if it made any difference to any publisher investigating fanfiction, but it made me feel better about publishing the links.

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[quote="Pug"]There’s a similar style story called "A new world order" by Kowalski (I think) on the BEarchive that I like for the same reasons – anybody that like Marknew would probably like it, though it goes a bit far for my taste (But then, so doth Mark sometimes – <G>), and journeys through TG towards the end, which does absolutely nothing for me, so I’ll give a squick warning for anyone else that wants to check it out. (Correction – Can’t find it there anymore – I’ve seen it other places – anyone have a link for a different website for people?).

Is this it?

http://www.digital-empire.net/mgs/authors/view.asp?AuthorID=144

Yeah, that looks like it looks like it – also found a copy of Five Percent – On Diana the Valhyrie’s site of course – <G>.

Hope y’all enjoy. I’ll also take this moment to second the recommendation of Au Goose – I’ve only read a couple of his stories, but the ones I’ve read have been fun.

Also – Jason Thorn’s For Want of a Nail is one of the better comic book stories written. Actually – I’ve never come across a Jason Thorn story that wasn’t excellent – any genre, any style – I think I’ve run across three or four of them on the ‘net in various odd places, but the only other one I remember the name of at this moment is "Djinn and Tonic"

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I tend to like long drawn out where you can see all the ramification of a premise, so of course MarkNew’s the spell is one of my favorites (and the story that gave me a whole new fetish back when I cataloged it from aawa, (In the last days of the usenet republic, before the darktimes, before the spampire . . .))

There’s a similar style story called "A new world order" by Kowalski (I think) on the BEarchive that I like for the same reasons – anybody that like Marknew would probably like it, though it goes a bit far for my taste (But then, so doth Mark sometimes – <G>), and journeys through TG towards the end, which does absolutely nothing for me, so I’ll give a squick warning for anyone else that wants to check it out. (Correction – Can’t find it there anymore – I’ve seen it other places – anyone have a link for a different website for people?)

Valerafon has some great stories too – I particularly like the mixture of good and evil women in them – Want more "My Bavarian Assignment"!

I believe I came across the fact that the author passed away (sadly – we corresponded a few times), but one of my favorite sites when he was among us was The Amazing Adventures of Sara Corel a well written story about an amazing powerful gynoid being placed on earth by the "Cryptonians" (so named because they’re a mystery to us) as a test – how will we react to something that has enough power to destroy us, save us, or do pretty much whatever she likes.

And there’s one called Five percent, about a man that gives away 5% of his size everytime he makes a wish for his wife to become sexier in some way that builds into a nicely twilight zonish adult story – he ends up a sex toy in his wifes handbag. It used to be on an old ftp site that’s long since defunct – I suppose I could post a copy if I can find it and people are interested.

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