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I see you’ve decided to focus mainly on the growth of Tara which is an interesting direction for the story. With her unique ability you could’ve had several fmg side stories thanks to her "one time only" gift, and then had her surrounded by a bevy of hardbodied beauties as her girlfriends.

Also, you mentioned in the story that other girls with her condition were able to grow bigger than normal fbb’s, but you have her growing only as big as perhaps a current light heavyweight fbb. Does this entail even more growth to come? 😀

Keep up the great work!

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I missed seeing the Shulkster (in person) in the comic as well, but it was still true to the fun nature of the series.

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I didn’t really care for the tongue-in-cheek way it ended. I would have preferred that they left nothing unresolved, but I guess that just leaves material for the next incarnation of the comic. Marvel’s building up a lot of people’s hopes for a future series, so they had better deliver. 8)

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Highly entertaining story – good humour and scene depiction. An instant classic! 8)

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Wow, I’m totally hooked. I was a huge fan of DBZ when I was younger, and this has just brought all of that rushing back. What’s better is that you’re story moves along at a much nicer pace than most of the DBZ arcs, for which I am most grateful. You should consider entering this as a fanfic to some of the DBZ sites out there as well – it really is very well written and draws you inexorably in as you read. Bravo. 8)

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Great start to this story! I think I see where this is headed, and with the hints dropped by Marknew’s post I’d like to offer a humble suggestion. If Superman did lose his powers I think it would be ironically funny if, while trying to make restitution, Z "accidentally" only makes him into a backwards spelling magician, that the other members of the JL underestimate 😆

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A great end to a highly entertaining and well written story. I look forward to the further adventures of Mr. Monty Bank (that would make a wicked series of movies) 8)

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Does anyone else find that She-Hulk’s face on the cover of issue #9 looks a lot like Colette Nelson’s? Even her pose is similar to one that Nelson strikes quite often in her photoshoots. I’m thinking that the artist may be a fellow fan, or maybe just using her as a reference.

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