[alex]

I still think this whole issue of virus only affecting females is no more unreal then ANY muscle growth EVER written in the history of FMG stories. There is NO SCIENTIFIC MEANS of enhacing muscle or strength in the level of these stories. The only means of a woman aquiring muscle, is for her to take massive doses of steroids, which most of the times will leave her looking ugly as dog! The only scientific possibility of muscle gain, that we know of, is by supressing the production of myostatin through gene therapy, which is something likely to happen in the next 10-20 years. Anything else, is fantasy. Pure fantasy!

For the sake of argument, lets just say that the virus causes a genetic mutation. Since we know that there are certain gender-biased genetic diseases, maybe the mutation only affects females. Is that good enough?

[alex]

AlexG,

Are you really trying to say that a virus that affects only women are scientific impossibility? As opposed to what? Genies? Magical devices that women grow an men shrink? Chemical formulas that cause muscles to transfer from one person to the other?

If this level of realism is so important to you, you should find a hard time reading 99.9% of the stories found on this forum on in any other FMG/giantess site on the panet.

🙄

[alex]

You have to follow your inspiration off course.

Thanks. I hope I won’t take things too far off course. 😉

Yeah, yeah, pick on the literally challenged… 🙄

I’ve tried to keep the right balance in the next parts and I’m sure you’ll let me know if I don’t succeed.

Be sure of that! 😈

[alex]

* rubs eyes not believing that he’s finally reading another chapter of "Pendant Changes" *

Great going Mark. I have a feeling things will really start to heat up from now on. .

I imagine Celia will learn about the pendant and want to be the all powerful bully. I was actualling hoping the pendant would be left alone. I just think it’s too much fun reading about the changes that have gone through, to want to see it change over and over again. But that’s just me. You have to follow your inspiration off course.

Again, great work and I’m greatly looking forward to reading the rest!

[alex]

I really see no distinction between shrunken men and giantess. It’s all a question relative sizes.

[alex]

The only endings that really disturb me, are the ones where the guy ends up in his lowest and the girl looses interest in him. For example: Gayle and a few of your other stories. You can be very cruel to your readers.

Yes, I’ve done that a few times. The Lilly Lane story ended like that, and so did The Good Witch. And the "Oh No!" stories all had the main character losing their chance for strength and power to an undeserving woman. But that was the point of those stories.

Contrary to some feedback from readers, I didn’t think the ending in my Jilly Milly story was a negative. Sure, Superboy didn’t get his powers back, but Jilly Milly got her comeuppance and learned a few things, and Superboy seemed happy with his superpowered neighbor. What did you think?

I loved the Superboy story. I thought the idea of the kid loosing his powers to a loved one, who was his carataker (practically his mom), was much more impressive then if it was some hateful enemy (although that works sometimes). Jill Milly getting her comeuppance really saved the story IMO. But that’s just my opinion, since I’m not really into the "super-evil-bitch-getting-everything-she-wants" kind of story. The whole ending was really great, and I remember spending hours trying to imagine a world where suddenly all girls turned into flying, muscular super girls.

And what about A Real Fantasy? Was it too depressing for the main character to lose all his strength? In that story, he got to keep the girl and live out his fantasy. Is that a happy or unhappy ending?

The only thing unhappy about that ending was from his wife’s POV. Specially since she was starting to enjoy being stronger then him. But in a way, him and the crazy chick ended living their fantasy, so it was certainly NOT bad ending.

I can assure you that no real persons have ever been harmed in my stories.

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And do you find the endings in the Brandi series depressing or enjoyable? Of course Mark never gets what he wants, but he always comes back and tries again in the next story. And Brandi certainly is never unhappy … in the end. Her power just keeps growing in each installment. (although I don’t know how I’ll make her any more powerful than she is now)

I never really took the Brandi stories very seriously. I always thought them as a surreal excercise of the same theme, in each segment. Ending with the bitchy girl always getting the power that was intended for the hero in the first place. The last chapter was even more surreal, with her becomming an egomaniac evil goddess and all. 🙂

Anyway, I don’t want my stories to repeat themselves. I like to keep my readers off balance, so you’ll never know quite how my story will end. Let me know if I fall into any disagreeable patterns.

(Except that I can tell you now, the Mark in the Brandi series will NEVER get what he wants!)

I think it’s nice when writers are a little unpredictable. And no, I have no hope for Mark. I know that if he suddenly finds a way to gather the power of the cosmos into himself, he will eventually screw-up and give it to Brandi. And she will enjoy it a lot! 🙂

[alex]

To answer the other post, sometimes happy endings just don’t work for me. But I hear you guys, I really do! Now tell me what is a happy ending? For example, are we FMG fetishists happier when guys regain their strength or when the girl keeps it? Certainly sometimes we’re happier when the guy and girl stay together, but who should be on top?

Maybe this should be a separate topic: "Alternative story endings I would have preferred."

The girl should ALWAYS keep her strength and end up on top! 😛

To me, happy endings are when the girl and the guy stay together. Even if she’s a little bit psycho. The only endings that really disturb me, are the ones where the guy ends up in his lowest and the girl looses interest in him. For example: Gayle and a few of your other stories. You can be very cruel to your readers. 🙂

Btw, today is a wonderful day, isn’t it? 😉

[alex]

This was by far your best work. I’m sure you put a lot of effort on it, and it was well rewarded. It’s definately one of the best slow growth amazon stories I’ve ever read. Congratulations and thank you for writing it.

[alex]

Another dimension that I wonder about is whether all the guys shrunk equally, or just to the degree of their masculinity. You mention that the females are between six and eight feet tall, but you never mention how short the guys are. 3 feet? two feet? There’s something I find strangely amusing about effeminate pretty boys towering over the macho men.

No. I think that in the story, all guys shrink to low female levels (around 5′) , and girls grow to 6’4" or more. It’s not a GTS story.

Why did you make the guys get fatter too? That wasn’t part of her wish.

From what I take, the guys who got fat, were the more muscular ones. Perhaps some of their muscle turned into fat. It makes some sense.

[alex]

LOL! That was great.

Someone shoud tell these girls (Kimberly and Cecile) to never, ever, EVER work in one of those suicide hotlines. 🙂

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