[alex]

Hey! I love this story!

Didn’t you write a second part also? I remeber reading it. Was it incomplete?

[alex]

hmmm…

You could it have both ways. Her being a dominant, poweful, yet loving amazon. I’m not really into the whole x1000000 stronger thing. I think she’s plenty strong as she is, and if she gets any bigger, it will become a giantess story.

What you could do, is have her make him give her some of his strength and muscles, being even more in her power. Mark Newman usually does this pretty well, sometimes in a pretty suffocating way. But it really works. Just a thought.

[alex]

alex wrote:

I liked how he was tricked into giving her control of his wishes.

I wouldn’t say that she had total control of his wishes, but it did have to be something they both agreed on; from that standpoint, they’re equal.

Ha! Not that equal! She’s 10 times stronger then he is now! Right now, he would probably do wherever she "asked"of him. Wouldn’t you? 😉

[alex]

Like everyone else here, I liked how he was tricked into giving her control of his wishes. Very nice story.

[alex]

Hehe. Nice chapter. You have quite an imagination. I wonder though, how do they hide such a place as "The Golden Apple", when more then a few men and some American women start bulking up?

Look forward to the next chapters. I hope we get more female muscle soon.

[alex]

It is true that there is a picture on the Internet which features a boy named Tim, his sister and their parents. But the character Tim Molaur is indeed my creation, not the other artist’s – he never gave his "Tim" a last name.

Dang! I can’t believe nobody will be able to write a story about people named Molaur anymore! This is a real setback for the FMG story industry! Dang! 🙄

[alex]

I saw a illustration once, a long time ago, with this exact same story. So, unless you were the one who created that drawing, I’ll assume you’re just being sarcastic with this whole copyright bullshit.

[alex]

Excellent chapter! Things are getting better and better!

The impression I’m getting is that some minor psychological changes are happening as well. The girls are in most cases finding weak guys cute and cudley, and guys that didn’t like strong girls are starting to like them.

Great work! I’m anxious for the next chapter.

[alex]

I really hope you’re not planning on making Monty strong. That would ruin it, IMO. I’m still hoping he’ll get tangled with some big hulking sister.

It was nice to hear some of the history. Who’s fighting the Mexicans, though? Why don’t they just nuke the place?

[alex]

Thanks very much for your comments.

When I first started with this, I was determined to make the hero "da man" in wits, book smarts, spirit, chutzpah, and non-jerk ego since strength was out of the question.

That’s one thing that bugged me in many FMG or GTS web fictions: the guy was a helpless worm in the lady’s arms, so he rolls over and plays dead.

No girl worth knowing honestly goes for that. She wants someone who can come to the table and respects himself to stand for himself. And in the world of megababes, if you’re not a physical uberdude yourself, you’d dang better bring something in the other departments that makes up for it.

I completely agree with you. It’s very hard to sympasize with the male characters in most femgrowth stories. They’re usually arseholes and jackasses who in most cases deserve to get beaten up or humiliated.

It’s refreshing to read about a guy with a strong character in such story for a change.

And I hate to break this, folks, but the school year’s starting, and this teacher needs to prep his lessons. I’m gonna be mega-busy. But don’t worry… Chapter 4 will be out by the first week of October, if not earlier. This story’s not over by a long shot.

Damn! It’s always a problem when people don’t get their priorities straight. jkd 😉

We’ll be waiting anxiously for the new chapters.

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