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  • September 1, 2004 at 8:18 pm in reply to: Power Play, chapter 3 #759
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    Great chapter! I’m loving this story. My god! I wouldn’t want to be him if he got caught by big Suzie! But I do hope he eventually ends up with some huge ubergirl , even if he keeps whining and complaing about it.

    September 1, 2004 at 2:22 am in reply to: Power Play, chapter 2 #745
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    I’m loving it so far. I like your writing and I like your main character. He seems to be a strong person having to live a weak, weak body. I’m anxious to read more, specially when Monty will start to interact more with the "ogresses".

    September 1, 2004 at 2:17 am in reply to: Pendant Changes 4 (Monday) #749
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    Nice! Things are starting to get very interesting. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

    August 30, 2004 at 4:27 pm in reply to: Power Play (chapter 1) #731
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    Excellent work!!! It’s great to see a follow-up on that story. Mark always leaves us wanting more, because all his stories end up right after the tranformation happens. It’s his style. But I loved reading about the global effects of such a transformation and the chaos it would entail. Please continue.

    August 27, 2004 at 9:30 pm in reply to: Swim Lesson #607
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    Nice! I hope you continue this.

    If I was him, I would want to take vengeance on her. Hell…anybody would do so! So maybe you could write another chapter about his retribution. Of course, you could always use the Mark Newman screw-up technique 😉 , and have his revenge NOT work exactly like he planned. Who knows…maybe making her even more powerful? Haha! *evil thoughts*

    August 27, 2004 at 6:20 am in reply to: The problems of having an amazon girlfriend (nudity) #719
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    I didn’t make it. I received it in an email from a friend. Thought it was funny. 🙂

    August 20, 2004 at 7:53 pm in reply to: Mistress of the House 2 #640
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    Excellent! Very wicked. I felt specially bad for Lisa.

    I like transfer stories in which the corruption of the character is not so obvious. I really don’t care for the one’s where the characters are 100% evil. They don’t feel so real.

    You could continue this. Having her bring other people to the house, such as her busty cousin, and some tall muscular men. It would be nice seeing her lording her huge body over her family, specially poor little Lisa, who would become her tiny little maid. Hehe…ok, I’ll stop fantasizing.

    Anyway…great work! 🙂

    August 10, 2004 at 6:09 am in reply to: Kate going super Ch 1. #491
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    Wow! Very nice! This is a very long, detailed story, with a good sense of realism despite the surreal nature of the situation. I’m sensing (and hoping) that in the next chapter, there will be lots more action. I’m also sensing that Kate is in danger of being corrupted by her powers. But even if that happens, I’m sure her good character will prevail.

    Please continue with it!

    August 2, 2004 at 9:14 pm in reply to: Intentions – Chapter 1 #241
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    Nice start! Please continue!

    August 2, 2004 at 2:29 pm in reply to: If you had the power … #259
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    Oh yes! No doubt I would end up using it. But I’d have to make sure that I’d have THE right person before doing it. Not only would she have to love me, but she would have to have a strong dominant side in her personality. Otherwise, it might be a turn-off for her. Most women prefer being with strong males who can protect them. Can you imagine making her your dream girl, only to see her run off with some big hulking guy? Arrrhhggh! 🙂

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