El_Roy_1999

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  • in reply to: First attempt at a story #16678
    El_Roy_1999
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    Just a short one for today, more tomorrow.

    When the fuzz arrives

    Minutes later, the police were there. They had located the Carland Mansion via the phone number and had sent a squad car to apprehend a group of criminals. When they got there, they found two rather pathetic burglars caught in the hedgerow. After capturing the two men, the police sergeant went to inspect the damages. He photographed the door, whose lock had been opened. After that, he went to see Kim. She sat on the sofa and had a drink to calm down. A young female officer was interviewing her. When the blonde told her about the burglars’ dialogue, the novice policewoman had to stop herself from giggling. Kim looked at her oddly, mirroring the woman’s occasional double-take at her body and lingerie.
    The older officer, complete with moustache and pot-belly sat down opposite to her and waited until the younger one was finished. He then put on his glasses, gave Kim a good look than said:
    “Well, miss, I must say you did impress me. Keeping your cool, leaving the phone on and taking care of one of the bad guys. Wow. Anyway, we might need you for the trial, so please stay around. We’ll have two officers on patrol in the area for the next few days in case that more criminals were around.”
    Kim thanked him, smiling weakly. She was vaguely aware that Jacob still wasn’t home, but the sudden rush of adrenalin had given her a boost. She was elated at her own strength and somehow, the older man’s admiration increased her confidence. Also he desperately tried to ogle at her soft breasts but did it in a “I’m married, so I really shouldn’t be doing this”-way. He actually blushed a little when she dropped one side of the robe, exposing just a little of her right breast.
    “OK. I hope that you’ll sleep well tonight. And don’t forget, you we’re very brave tonight, but you shouldn’t take any risks.”
    In the end, the police left, occasionally giving her an inspired stare. She turned off the lights, desperate to calm down, then went to the kitchen to fix herself a night cap. She made a mental note of calling the locksmith tomorrow. The front-door had been broken open, so it would have to be fixed first thing I the morning.
    She opened the fridge to see if there was any Bacardi left, feeling the cold chill on her bare skin. Her nipples got hard instantly, swelling to half-inch long bolts. She gently stroked her breast, when she froze. There was something at the door. She waited, lit only by the fridge’s lamp. Suddenly she heard a familiar voice.
    “Kim? Is that you?”

    in reply to: First attempt at a story #16675
    El_Roy_1999
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    Your daily fix. Well, I'm not quite sure yet, but I might have to take tomorrow off. Sorry guys.

    The return?

    On the night of Jacob’s expected return, Kim fell into an almost meditative state. She washed, checked her haircut (she had been to the hairdresser earlier that day), prepared her make-up and put some moisturising cream on to soften her skin. She had decided on a very reduced styling, so as not to detract from her tremendous physique.
    After this, she put on her underwear, lifting her huge, soft breasts into her bra’s cups one by one. She loved the feeling they gave her. They were warm, heavy and so oddly natural that she instantly hugged herself. She slowly realised that the last two-and-a-half months had been the loneliest time in her life. Even her attempted fuck with Diego had left her even emptier than before. Kim thought about her situation for a while, looking at her mirror dreamily. She had taken all this on her to please a man. Was he worth it? The prospect of wealth was still there, but had been forced into the background by her wanting to become Jacob’s fantasy. She had definitely started to love him. A complete stranger so to say.
    She put on a black silk robe with golden details, mostly depicting Asian dragons. Nina had been very strict on this one. She had talked about dragon-symbolism for an hour, before finally showing off her budding tattoo on her back. Since she still wanted to become larger, she had only a small part done to avoid further stretching.
    Kim turned off the lights, went down to the living-room and laid down on the beautiful white leather sofa Walter had always been so fussy about. She seriously wondered why he hadn’t wanted to be buried with it. She looked out of the window into the garden.
    At eight pm, nothing happened. Jacob’s flight was supposed to land at 7, so she started to wonder. She waited 15 more minutes, then checked the arrivals on the television. Everything was perfect. The machine had landed on time. She sat back down, waiting.
    After a while, she turned on the TV. She turned the volume down so she would hear him, but still nothing happened.
    At ten pm, she got up angrily, turned off the television and went up to her bedroom. Fuck him, she thought. She stripped down to her underwear, laid down on her bed and tried to sleep a little. Still, she was too nervous to doze off. She looked at the ceiling, feeling angry. Suddenly, she heard a clicking noise. The front-door key? She got to her feet, put on the robe and opened the bedroom door. The noise came again, this time louder, then the front-door opened.
    Kim let the lights turned off so as not to spoil the surprise and went down barefoot. All of a sudden, she heard two unfamiliar voices.
    “Can’t you open it a little quieter? Stupid fuck!”
    “Aw, do it yourself if you’re so smart.”
    “Shut up, I heard something!”
    She sneaked downstairs to get the phone and call the police. She found it on the sofa-table, vaguely aware of the burglars’ steps by the library door. She dialled the emergency phone number, not realising that the phone would play a fancy little beeping tune while connecting. Instantly, the voices in the library went silent. Just as she heard the operator’s voice, the a shadowy figure appeared in front of her. The man pointed a gun at her and motioned her to turn off the phone. Just as she wanted to comply, another man rushed in, slapping the armed one over the head.
    “You goddamn stupid fuck! Why the hell did you bring a gun with you? Do you want us to go to fucking jail? If the cops catch us with a bloody pistol, they’ll get us life for attempted murder.”
    The first one ducked down, looking aghast in the darkness.
    “I’m sorry. I just brought it for self-defence, I thought the house was empty…”
    “If the stupid house is empty, you don’t need any stupid weapon for self-defence!”
    As the argument went on, Kim tried to retreat into the darkness. Suddenly, the first one screamed something about her getting away and charged at her. Kim lifted her massive arm as a reflex, the burglar hit it, let out a weak scream, and fell down panting. The guy at her feet desperately tried to get up, but apparently he was completely smashed. He wheezed a little while getting on all fours.
    Suddenly the lights went on. The second one had turned them on. He looked at her and muttered a “shit!” under his breath. The two burglars ran as fast as they could, the first one significantly slower than the other one.

    in reply to: Do you oekaki? #17188
    El_Roy_1999
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    Wow. I like the colouring. Very calm and earthy, yet powerful. Mmhmm!

    in reply to: First attempt at a story #16672
    El_Roy_1999
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    I had the same problem (surgeries on the heart) at various times of my life. It's become a sort of identifying thing for me. While it doesn't turn me on, it's still something that makes me who I am and makes me understand other people who suffered the same. Dying and not ending up dead makes me happy, but also uneasy. I hope I didn't upset you, and guarantee that I'll hold back from now on. So, on to the next part!

    Hooray for boobies (I just had to)

    Kim spent the next week eating ice-cream, watching TV and generally not training. She spent her time on the couch, slowly getting used to the fact that she was unable to see her feet when standing up. Indeed, Louisa had done some marvellous work. The bandages had come off after five days, showing perfectly healed scars. Kim was astounded, but still preferred to rest the whole week. Nina came by every other day, telling her about her various sexual adventures and conquests. Apparently, she had literally picked up a few guys and carried them home with her, subsequently enjoying their company all night long.
    Examining her new assets, Kim slowly realised that her life had indeed changed. She started to like her new shape and enjoyed herself. When Nina brought her the newest outfits, it began to feel right.
    “Now this next one is an evening dress. It’s black, looks classy, and you can tie it this way to show off your shoulders and this way to show your boobs. Here are a few bras, they should fit you nicely. Not that you need them, but since it’s mostly for looks, they’ll be perfect.”
    Kim tried everything on, admiring herself in Nina’s tailor mirrors. She pushed her breasts together, showing a deep, swollen cleavage.
    “Jacob will love this. I’m going to be rich. Wow.”
    “By the way, do you have any idea how exactly you’re going to get his money?”
    “I think I’ll seduce him, then ask him for my share, and well, I can’t imagine that he won’t comply.”
    “That seems sensible, but where does Louisa come in? She engineered all this in the first place. She’s not a very trusting person, so why should she help you without a guarantee?”
    Kim looked at her friend, wondering. She had implicitly trusted Louisa to come up with a plan beneficial to both of them, but somehow it was coming apart now. What was she up to? She decided to call her partner-in-crime tomorrow. Meanwhile she concentrated on the job at hand.
    She spent the next two weeks trying to maintain her shape, occasionally improving smaller areas which she had previously neglected. Nina had developed a fascinating ability to point out these spots. At the same time, her friend was slowly turning into a broad-shouldered monster. Since she was a little shorter than Kim, her muscles looked even bigger. Still, she showed no signs of being done. She still pumped iron every day, apparently fulfilling her life-long desire. Oddly enough, her ongoing preference for junk-food and sweets had not given her Kim’s hourglass-like physique, but had rather maintained her overweight looks, complete with big breasts, proud belly and massive booty. Nina loved the sumo-style and radiated this enthusiasm in such a way that most men had a hard time resisting her.
    Kim entirely forgot to call Louisa. When she tried after a week, Louisa’s answering machine told her to call again later. A personal visit to her home didn’t yield anything either.

    BTW, spell checking disappeared.

    in reply to: The Touch: part 9! Sorry for the massive delay. really. #14903
    El_Roy_1999
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    Waaa-hoo!
    more please!
    I just love the whole situation.

    in reply to: First attempt at a story #16670
    El_Roy_1999
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    Well, I've been a GM for RPGs for years, so I guess I just picked up a thing or two about keeping the tension.

    Getting work done

    Kim’s next day started at 4 am. She woke up from a very odd nightmare. She was back at her parents’ house in the small town she had lived in until she could leave. Her parents were sitting at the kitchen table, staring at her disdainfully. Her mother gave her her best “it’s not a proper way to behave” look, her father was staring at her in a confused and estranged way. They were completely silent. As their resentment bore heavily on her she felt despised and tried to retreat to her room. However, she felt that her body was too large and cumbersome for her to escape. She could not move. She started choking and woke up.
    She got up and took a cool shower, spending a ridiculous time to clean her massive body. The sheer surface of her skin made her feel oddly out of place inside herself. While Nina seemed to enjoy her transformation, Kim felt lost. The deep cuts between her muscles were each meticulously cleaned until she finally felt at home.
    Her skin still soft, she slowly shaved her body hair, which had grown sparse lately. Being a blonde, her hair had been difficult to see before, but now she only needed to shave her legs once every week. On the other hand, her legs were now much fuller than ever before, forcing her to check an increasingly large area.
    After this, she anxiously watched TV for three hours, occasionally drinking a glass of water and trying to pass time. Nina was probably just returning home now, so she shouldn’t call her either. Finally, she got up, put on her tracksuit and called a cab. Minutes later, she arrived at Louisa’s home and office. She rang. Seconds later, the surgeon opened the door, asking her to come in.
    “Hi and good morning! We’re almost ready for you, Helena is just preparing the surgery, and then we start, so don’t make yourself too comfortable.”
    She sat down on the sofa, surprised to see how deep she sank in it.
    “I’ll just show you the implants. They’re from the south. I have a good friend there, he does advanced surgery implements.” The dark-haired woman handed her two enormous transparent plastic packages. Each of them contained a huge round object, easily as big as her head.
    “These are great: They can’t break, feel like real and best of all, don’t stop X-rays, so you don’t risk undetected breast cancer. Also, they’re bullet-proof. Cool, huh?”
    “They are way too big, aren’t they?”
    “They’ll fit you well, you’ll see. Now, please strip. I have to see the area for surgery.” Kim removed her tracksuit top and her bra, which wasn’t doing anything anyway. Her chest was swollen, yet mostly muscles. Louisa pinched her breast-tissue, pulling the skin. It stretched perfectly. She smiled.
    “Oh boy, this is going to be great. All cool and easy!”
    She quickly jotted a number of lines on Kim’s upper body, then led her to the preparation area. Inside, everything was ready. After disinfecting, they entered the surgery. Kim climbed on the table as neither of the two other women was able to lift her massive body. Helena and Louisa set up the sight-screen, covered their patient with green drapes, and finally gave her the anaesthetic.
    After a while, Kim began to feel numb and relaxed. She felt that something was happening behind the screen, but her already distant relationship to her body was further increased by the anaesthesia, and so she barely noticed when the two women were done. Still groggy and hungry, she was pushed up into a sitting position. She drowsily witnessed as her enormously enlarged breasts were being wrapped in bandages, then laid back down. She quickly dozed off.

    in reply to: Confrontations, First Four Chapters #668
    El_Roy_1999
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    moremoremoremore!

    in reply to: First attempt at a story #16668
    El_Roy_1999
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    Just a small part today. More tomorrow!

    A walk in the park

    A few minutes later, they were jogging along in the city park. They went past the fountain depicting a few lithe nymphs pouring water into the pool, forever locked in a pointless exercise. The people who were enjoying the lush evening stared in open disbelief at the two women running by. Nina was loving every minute of it, occasionally shooting seductive glances at suitable men. Kim was running along quickly, easily overtaking her friend before realising that her strength now sufficed to leave her behind without even thinking. She fell back, going along in what felt like a brisk walk. Her tracksuit seemed out of place next to Nina’s tight sports top.
    “You’re having a good time, aren’t you? All the boys check you out, you’re getting the body of your dreams, while I’m slowly turning into a freak.”
    “Aw, come on. You’re looking great. Jacob’s going to love it. And by the way, you’ll have to hold on tight on him.”
    “Why?” Kim was quite fed up with her friend’s quickly changing lifestyle and outlook. Somehow she preferred the more reluctant Nina.
    “Because I’m going to get bigger than you.”
    “You’re crazy. Bigger than this? You’ll be as large as Diego!”
    “Exactly. Maybe bigger if I can fit it. I sure wish I were taller. On the other hand, I look tighter this way.”
    “Speaking of Diego, he still hasn’t tried to say sorry. What’s up with this guy?”
    “I think he’s not really sure about the whole thing. He just doesn’t want to think about it. At least that’s what I believe.”
    “I guess he got in trouble with his boyfriend. What’s his name… Craig? Or something like that.”
    Nina slowed down a little, catching her breath. Kim had accelerated to what felt like a slow jog, not realising that she easily outran her friend. Between sharp breaths, the shorter woman nodded.
    “That’s right. I’m going to see him tomorrow. We’re going to the movies together. I’ll try to convince Diego to clear this mess up.”
    “To the movies? You’re really enjoying this, aren’t you?”
    “Definitely, I…” She was interrupted by Kim’s phone.
    “Just a second. Kim Carland?”
    Louisa was on the phone.
    “Hi. I’ve been busy the last few days, but guess what? Your new breasts have arrived. You’re going to love them. What do you think about coming to my house tomorrow morning? Best before breakfast.”
    “Okay. Can I see them before they go in?”
    “Tomorrow. I have a patient tonight. I’m quite sure this will take all night. But don’t worry, I’ll be fit in the morning.”
    “All right. See you tomorrow morning.”
    She hung up. Nina gave her a wondering look.
    “It was Louisa. I’m not quite sure I really want this. She seems full of coke right now. I hope she calms down until tomorrow.”

    Actually, Louisa spent the whole night in the surgery, testing the implant substance. Her patients were rather pleased.

    in reply to: First attempt at a story #16666
    El_Roy_1999
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    Glad you like it. As for the shifts, well, I'm not that adept at writing dialogues, so I hope bringing together the strands of the story will solve it. Anyway, here's the next part.

    This is the new sh*t

    “It hurts! Ah! Don’t touch it!” Nina was lying on Diego’s massage table. She was screaming in agony as Kim gently tried to relieve her soreness.
    “I guess this isn’t the right way to do it. Wait, I try it by pulling here…”
    “Argh! Stop it. Stop it please, for the love of god!” Nina twisted around, her full, soft body moving with uncommon speed and agility.
    “I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to hurt you. I just…” Her voice trailed off. Diego was standing in the door-frame. He gave Kim a weak look, as if ashamed of being in her presence, then stepped over to the table. With a few professional twists, he released the tension in Nina’s aching muscles. Kim returned to her training.
    Later, in the evening, Nina joined Kim in the Jacuzzi. As was fitting for Diego’s home, the room was entirely decorated with statues of naked and semi-naked men. The full-figured woman lowered herself achingly into the warm pool, her naked body floating in the bubbling water.
    “I can’t believe how tired I am.” She slowly submerged herself. Her broad-shouldered friend sighed approvingly. Nina reappeared, brushing her red hair from her face.
    “I really hope I start to grow soon. It makes me giddy just to think about it. I just have to say thank you again for paying for the treatment and the training.”
    “Actually, I’m not. Taehan and Frank said that they’ll check it with Louisa and Diego seems to have a very bad conscience. Anyway, I’m quite happy to have a partner around when I’m with him. I know he’s trying to be nice, but all this calmness gives me the creeps.”
    “Don’t be so hard on him. I believe that he’s just really sorry. I guess he just can’t explain the whole situation himself.”
    “Whatever. It’s good to have you around. By the way, how come you’re into muscles?”
    Nina grabbed slowly at the fruit juice bottles on the pool’s sideboard and handed one to Kim for opening. She took a sip, then explained.
    “It’s really not surprising. I have two older brothers, they both played hockey for as long as I can remember. They look like young gods.” Kim’s eyes sparkled for a second. “Anyway, I always wanted to be like them. My mom hated the mere idea of me participating in a men’s sport, so I was sent to do gymnastics. That sort of led me away from sports. Later, when we left school, I tried to train for a while, but there were no results. I quickly got frustrated and here I am. Also, I grew up with all the superhero comic books and they sort of inspired me to be a tailor. I even made my own superman suit complete with cape and logo when I was ten. I never wore it, of course.”
    “Superman?” Kim grinned stupidly. Nina punched her. “I’m just imagining. Sorry.”
    “I really hope this will work. It does for you, but you’ve always been easy with everything.”
    Kim splashed water at her.
    Outside, the man in the bushes opposite Diego’s house looked through his visor and hit the trigger.

    Throwing your weight around

    “Hooray! I’ve gained 15 pounds!” Three weeks later, Nina uttered the most unexpected sentence in her life. Instantly, she had to laugh. Kim just came in from the gym and stared at her desperately. Her best friend was slowly turning crazy. On the other hand, she was also turning into a broad-shouldered, muscular uber-woman, with large soft breasts, a fine belly and a posture a ballet dancer would kill for.
    “Look at me! Will you just look at this?” Nina put her palms together in front of her huge chest and started bouncing her boobs around. “Left, right, left, right…” The last weeks had proven to be a catalyst for her sparkling personality, lifting the abuse fed weight from her mood. Actually, Kim found her friend a little too cheerful for her taste. Apart from training, they had spent most of their evenings at bars by the river, meeting young men and dancing with them. To be more precise, it was mostly Nina who danced, while Kim hid in the darker parts of the clubs they visited.
    The last three weeks had changed her physique in an astonishing fashion: Her athletic build had grown into a full-scale musclewoman shape. Her shoulders had become as big as bowling balls, her arms were now huge, easily past the 20” mark. What worried her most was the speed at which her back was becoming broader and her chest deeper. At the start of the week, Louisa had called, scheduling an appointment for the removal of her implants. Three days later, her stitches were healed. Helena, the anaesthetist, had never seen anything like it. Also, Louisa had been confident that removing the implants under local anaesthetic would be possible. She had been right. However, Kim became increasingly intrigued at the changes in her body. Something strange was happening.
    Kim had switched to more covering tops when she realised that her cleavage was now merely pectoral. Her abdominals and her legs had become even larger, her calves swollen into a huge diamond shape. Somehow, she was turning into a sort of mini-Diego.
    “Hey Kim, stop the daydreaming! Let’s go jogging. I want to show off the new style.”
    Indeed, their clothes were the one major improvement in this situation: Nina was working overtime to provide them with a never-ending supply of figure hugging designs. Kim had never seen such a deep cleavage on Nina. Not even when she was wearing her underwear.
    “I’m coming. I’ll just switch the radio off.”
    She returned to the gym, found the remote and quelled the news anchor who was just telling the world that the zoo animals stolen a few weeks ago had been found dead in a forest close to the city edge. Oddly enough, only the male ones were found.

    in reply to: First attempt at a story #16662
    El_Roy_1999
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    And still more.

    Tales to tell

    As Nina started doodling, trying to find the right proportions, Kim had a cup of tea and began to tell her about the last week. After a second cup of tea, she moved closer to Nina, brushing aside the growing heap of sketches and hugged her. She started to sob. Finally, she told her friend about Diego. Together, they wept, when suddenly, the phone rang.
    Kim inhaled, calmed down a little and fumbled to pick up the phone.
    “Yeah. What’s up? I’m not in the mood…”
    “Hi. It’s Frank. You know, from Frank and Taehan. Your pushers, you know.”
    “Fuck you, stupid, don’t talk like that on the phone, we‘re going to get busted!” a smaller voice said, in the background.
    “Anyway. We just wanted to tell you that we invented a bigger and better chemical, that will eventually…. Fuck this, come over already, and we show you.”
    “And bring some beer. I don’t get anything to drink around here.” The little voice added.
    Something said “ook?” on the phone, than they hung up.
    Nina stared at her muscular companion:
    “What was that?”
    “The guys who invented the chemicals that made me grow so fast want to see me. Apparently, they’ve invented a better version.”
    “A better version…” Nina’s eyes trailed out of focus. She was clearly imagining something.
    “Can I come along?”

    Meanwhile:
    “We are unsure that your plan to recover our funding will succeed. It seems to be a little complex. Are you sure we shouldn’t try to quicken the results?”
    “That won’t be necessary. I plan to force them into a dilemma, so please let me take care of it.”
    “What if they choose to expose you.”
    “They won’t. They’re easily controlled.”

    The house that built Kim

    Minutes later, Nina’s cute little car stopped in front of an abandoned building in the older part of the city. It’s two stories were dark, the shades drawn. Nina got out of the car quickly looking around to see if the area was safe. All around, dark shadows lurked. Kim was grumbling as she tried to extricate herself from the car.
    “This stupid thing is definitely too cramped. How do I get out of this awful seat? Ah. Finally.”
    She stretched, lifting her arms above her head. Her chest surged out, showing off her huge pectoral muscles. Nina’s look was frozen on her friend’s body.
    “Are you coming?” The widow walked briskly to the house and rang the doorbell. Nina followed her quickly, shaking her head to get rid of this vision.
    A surveillance camera turned towards them, then a buzzer opened the door. The girls walked in, the door shutting automatically. In the darkness, they heard strange shuffling noises. Just as they wondered where to go next, a lit door-frame became visible. In it, Frank’s silhouette appeared. He wore a white lab-coat, his glasses and short brown hair giving him a very professional look. Inside, grunts and screams were audible.
    “Hi. You got the beer? We’re fresh out.” He paused. “Who’s the fat chick?”
    Kim shot him a scorning gaze, her neck bulging. Nina shrunk back into the shadows.
    “No beer for you. I really don’t want to see how insulting you get when you’re really drunk.”
    Frank took a step back.
    “I… Sorry. Just a reflex. A stupid one. I’m sorry.”
    “Oook!”
    They walked in, Taehan was occupied with a huge beast, the afore-mentioned gorilla-sized chimp. It was even more muscular now, it’s shoulders ridiculously large and broad. It was eating very fast. In cages all around the room, other animals were being held, each one a monstrous version of it’s species. A huge, badger-sized rat sat in a dog cage, watching the new arrivals. The stench in the room was overwhelming. The scientists managed to find four clean chairs and put them close to a large lab table. Kim sat down calmly and introduced her friend. Frank looked down.
    “You do have a new chemical, don’t you?”
    The two scientists instantly burst into a long-winded explanation of it’s various and complicated properties, before being cut short by flick of Kim’s wrist.
    “Just the facts, please…”
    “Basically, it increases the speed of muscle build-up, enhances nutrients absorption and allows for faster after-training recovery. And it makes your skin stretchier. That’s good. You double your mass in three weeks. More if you were an ape. Which you are not. Not at all.”
    Taehan covered his eyes and sighed as his partner fumbled his way into a broken silence.
    “But it’s still needles, isn’t it?”
    “That’s right. It works best that way.”
    Kim shivered. She casually glanced at Nina and suddenly noticed that her friend was staring into infinity. She seemed to be dreaming.
    “What’s up? Hey, girl, wake up!”
    Nina jerked back into consciousness. She gave Kim a very determined look.
    “I want some of this. Please.”

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