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Figures. I have a GCN and an XBOX, but not a PS2. I guess that i'll have to start saving up.

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WOW!!!  😮

What system???

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Your grammar seems fine in your message. I have to say, though, that grammar isn't that big of a deal when you are writing something for an informal purpose. There are a number of people who post and write stories on this board, and their English grammar isn't the best. Still, they are able to get past that barrier and write some amazing stories. If you still feel uncomfortable about it, I would be more than willing to edit it for you. Just let me know what you prefer.

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Despite how much I bug you, it is still your story. Just move through it at your own pace. If you rush, then the end result turns out worse.

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Now that IS interesting.  😮
What system is it on? Also, how detailed is it? Do the graphics of the game do it justice?

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I agree. Your work is fantastic, and if you're not adding to one prject, you're likely going to be working on another. It all works out, as far as I'm concerned.

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That anouncement was a bit bland. Can you try to add some more flare to it? I mean, come on! This is a huge event! We need some better advertisement!  😉

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I agree. This is very good. I especially like how you relate the character's feelings at the odd things that take place in this FF-like world.

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You know what? I forgot to give y'all a summary of the two stories.

The one with a different storyline takes place on another world in a medieval/fantasy setting. The five good guys are questing to stop the five bad guys, who have basically taken control of the entire region that the story takes place in. The only way to do that is to recover an ancient artifact. At about the same time that the four main characters for the good guys set out to find it, the four main characters for the bad guys set out to stop them. They have some minor clashes throughout the storyline, but there is nothing decisive about them. Finally, both teams find out where this artifact is located. They set out immediately. As the team of the bad guys gets closer, they begin to harbor traitorous feelings. If one of them could gain the artifact, then that person could easily overpower the other three as well as their boss, and become the new leader. They begin to plot against each other. Both teams arrive at the hiding place for the item at the same time, and have a final brawl. Saying any more will ruin the story, so I'll let your imagination take it from here.

The one that has the same storyline takes place on earth about 2000 years from now, in a post-apocolyptic world. Earth is conquered in the year 3000, just after New Year's by an empire of monstrous creatures. These creatures come from a number of parallel universes that have also been conquered. They tore rifts in the fabric of time and space and came through, slaughtering everyone who got in the way. About 1000 years later, a solid resistance has formed. It consists of humans, obviously, and two main "good races" that came through the rifts soon after the monsters. They are the elves and the dwarves. There are some others, but they are minor and do not have a separate branch of the resistance. There are only three branches, one for each main "good race". The story is about how the four main good guys meet and begin to work together to take down the empire. I can't give too many more details about this one, mostly beacuse it is difficult to say anything that wouldn't give away anything important to the story.

Since, this is all new information, I'm going to reset the poll so that you can better pick which one you prefer. Please be honest.

Oh, and in response to minimanmax, the version that is going to be sold is going to have to be written to appeal to the masses, but, to make up for that inconvenience, I am writing another version. One that I like. I suppose that I could publish that too, but it would definitely not sell as well.

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Well it is progress…

It doesn't mean that I'm happy about it, though. 😥

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