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  • in reply to: Virago Vistas #17368
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    Nice chapter Axel (Congratulations on your 300 post 😉 ). I must say that I got confused a few times since the two women were called Tia, but the rest was very good. Glad too see that Tia kept her gentle personality. I only feel sorry for the other Tia. Hope she can find happiness too.

    I will be looking for the next chapter and see how Tia's children are doing. (Thanks for the tip about the time that has passed  😉 )

    Max

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    Despair
    By Max

    Part 6

    Erin gasped as she saw how beautiful the intruder was. She had
    long blonde hair at waist level. An hour glass that any model
    will kill for and a female curves that could produce heart
    attacks in any man.

    "You don't intimate us, weather girl" said bravely Erin
    stepping between her fallen sister and the mysterious woman.

    "My name is Enhantress and I can do much more that control
    the nature elements" said Enhantress "But right now, a person
    needs my help and I think that your sister could need a hand
    too" she said.

    Erin turned her attention to her injured sister and went to help
    her. Meantime, Enhantress walked to Alyssa's side and
    kneeing next to her, she put her palm over her chest.

    "Hold on Absolute Drainer, this will take only a minute" said
    Enhantress as a warm light came from her hand and washed
    Alyssa's body. Soon, Alyssa's injures began to heal and in no
    time the heroin was completed healed.

    "Thanks for your assistance Enhantress" said Alyssa trying to
    stand up. Her legs didn't response too well and she fell back in
    the floor.

    "No please. Try to recover your strength. I have only heal your
    wounds" explained Enhantress. "Don't worry about the twins.
    They are no match for me" she said blinking an eye to Alyssa.

    Alyssa for a moment kept looking at this mysterious woman.
    She looked so confident and at the same time so gentle. 'I
    really hope she can take care of them' thought Alyssa.

    "Well, well, well. It seems that we have found another
    enhanced woman that has rose against her own kind. Surrender
    to us now Enhantress and your life will be spared" said Dory as
    her sister helped her to stand up. She still was recovering from
    the electricity shock.

    "You two have caused too much damage and for that I will
    stop you right now" said Enhantress assuming a heroin pose.

    "Don't make me laugh" grinned Dory firing ice beams from
    her eyes. Enhantress was bathed by them and quickly sealed in
    an ice cube. "What is the matter Enhantress? Have you 'frozen'
    of fear?" laughed Dory and her sister.

    "At the contrary" said Enhantress from inside her cold prison.
    She began to glow turning herself into a living flame. The ice
    melt and the heroin was free again. "I just want to thank you
    for such refreshing bath" smiled Enhantress as she turned into
    flesh again.

    "I will teach you a lesson for making fool at my sister" said
    Erin as she unleashed a hard attack toward Enhantress.
    Outstandingly, Enhantress was able to stop the attack with a
    single hand.

    "My strength!! I don't feel it!!" cried Erin as she felt
    powerless.

    "That is right Erin. You don't feel it because you don't have
    powers. And that means…" grinned Enhantress as she pressed
    tight Erin's hands making her cry in pain. "… that you
    invulnerability has also gone" said Enhantress.

    Erin fell on her knees. The intense pain broke her will and she
    begged for forgiveness crying as a little girl. "Please, let me
    go" she cried, but Enhantress didn't released her.

    "Let her go!!" screamed Dory focusing her telekinetic powers
    on Enhantress.

    "Relax Dory" said Enhantress as she sent a psychic wave that
    made at Dory lost her balance and fell to the floor. "I will be
    with you in a moment"

    Turning her attention to Erin, Enhantress said "You realize that
    I can crush you if I want to, but that would make me an abuser.
    When you gained your powers, you should have use them to
    stop at the man who slaved you and not kill him. Because the
    fact that you are more powerful, not give you the right to take
    another life. Remember that" said Enhantress pressing stronger
    Erin hand.

    Erin couldn't take the pain anymore and fainted off defeated.
    Demonstrated her superiority, Enhantress released her hand.
    "That will teach you a lesson" she said.

    Slowly Dory regained her senses as the effects of psychic
    attack passed. Looking at her sister unconscious on the floor
    was a bad signal.

    "You think that you are too rude right. Now, you will have to
    face me without your powers" said Dory facing her plans
    against Enhantress to use her own nullifying power.

    "That won't help you" said Enhantress. "In case you didn't
    notice, I use your power against your sister, and I can use it
    against you" she said lifting her arms.

    Their nullifying powers hit each other. Alyssa could see the
    point where the two powers were fighting as a kind of energy
    wall appeared in middle of Enhantress and Dory. That wall was
    formed by their energies.

    Soon, the energy wall began to move toward Dory. 'She is too
    powerful for me' thought Dory as Enhantress powers were
    slowly overcoming her own. 'I better run before she nullifies
    my power' she thought. In a quick move, she flied away
    thought the hole in the roof..

    "You won't escape from me" yelled Enhantress. "Please
    Absolute Drainer, take care of Erin as I brought back at her
    sister" she said before flying at great speed after Dory.

    In a matter of seconds, Enhantress passed at Dory and stood in
    front of her. "You won't go any further" said confidently
    Enhantress.

    Looking for a way to escape, Dory saw a building with a big
    publicity sign on. She grinned as she used her telekinetic to
    twist and bend the metal supports of the sight. The heavy
    structure began to collapse.

    The noise of metal twisting didn't escape of Enhantress
    sensitive ears. She turned her head and watched how the sign
    was about to fall into a transited street. People passing by
    began to scream in terror.

    "You better hurry" laughed Dory as she turned around and
    flied away. She stopped abruptly as Enhantress appeared in
    front of her way. "Aren't you going to save those people?"
    asked Dory astonished to see at Enhantress.

    Enhantress smiled and pointing out to the sign, she said "I'm
    doing that, see".

    Dory's eyes almost popped out of her face as she saw at not
    only one, but at two Enhantress flying at super speed toward
    the falling sign. One caught the heavy structure with one hand,
    as the other project a force field above the passing by people to
    avoid they get hurt by the falling debris.

    The first Enhantress flew with the sign toward the roof of the
    building and firing heat beams from her eyes, she placed the
    sign right where it belonged. Meantime, the second Enhantress
    wrapped her force field around the debris compacting them
    into a harmless boulder which she left in a garbage truck
    nearby.

    With their job done, the two Enhantress returned at the side of
    the original one and merged back into her body. "I have the
    capability to clone myself and each of my clones have all my
    powers. As you can see, there is no way you can beat me" said
    Enhantress.

    "No!! I won't give up!! I will fight!!" said Dory enraged.

    Enhantress sighed and materialized a pair of strange handcuffs
    on Dory's hands. "You will come with me peacefully" she
    said.

    Dory found herself under a kind of spell as she found herself
    unable to disobeyed Enhantress command. "Yes, I will come
    with you peacefully" she replied as she flied behind Enhantress
    back to the house.

    Once in the house, Enhantress put another pair of handcuff on
    Erin who was under Alyssa supervision. As her sister, Erin
    found herself with no will of her own.

    "You have great powers Enhantress. How do you obtain
    them?" asked Alyssa astonished at how easy this woman had
    defeat at the twins.

    "That is something we will discuss later" smiled Enhantress.
    "Right now, let's help at Etheria to get out of Dory" she said as
    her hands faced at Dory.

    Once Enhantress nullified Dory's power, Samantha began to
    re-emerge from Dory. When Samantha was out of her body,
    Dory lost all she gained from her and became Erin's identical
    twin again.

    Alyssa helped at Samantha to recover from the shock of being
    absorbed as Enhantress used her healing powers to cure at the
    owner of the house. By passing so long time inside Dory, the
    woman's muscles were atrophied.

    "The woman will be able to move again" said Enhantress
    standing up.

    "Thanks for your help Enhantress" said Samantha still trying to
    focus her eyes.

    "I was glad to help Etheria" smiled Enhantress. Then, she
    walked to where the twins were as she turned her arms etherial.
    In a quick move, Enhantress plugged her arms inside the chests
    of the girls and tore off from them the nucleolus of their
    powers.

    "Can you do that?" asked Alyssa and Samantha at the same
    time.

    "It's easy when you have the tools" smiled Enhantress as she
    materialized two containers for the twins' power sources.
    "Now that they are ordinary girls again, I will take them to the
    justice as well as this woman" she said as she levitated the
    bodies of the twins and the woman.

    "They have committed crimes and they should be punished for
    them. Please wait for me. I will right back" said Enhantress as
    she vanished in the thin air letting at Alyssa and Samantha
    speechless.

    To be continued…

    in reply to: A.D. 3 – Despair (Completed) #16628
    Max
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    Glad that you are enjoying the story so far. Right now, I'm working in the next part and I'm trying to get it ready for today. Keep your fingers crossed  😉

    Max

    in reply to: Lady of the Rings #17352
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    Glad you have enjoyed it so much Fonk  😀 Thanks a lot for your comments. I really appreciate them.

    Max

    in reply to: A.D. 3 – Despair (Completed) #16626
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    Glad you like this part Minimanmax. I'm not sure if tomorrow I will be able to post Part 6, since I'm still having problems to write it properly.

    But I promise that you will find more about this woman in the next chapter for sure.

    Max

    in reply to: my first story #17029
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    Interesting twist. So now Nicole can have a chance to get her hands over the formula. Very promising.

    Great chapter Frank. Nice to see what Dina can do with only a portion of the formula. This story is getting quite interesting indeed.

    Max

    in reply to: Virago Vistas #17364
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    Great beginning. Glad to see at Tia back in action with her gentle way to use her strength. I wonder how old are her children now.

    Thanks Axel from bringing back at the great character you created. I will be looking eagerly forward for the next part.

    Max

    in reply to: Lady of the Rings #17350
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    Thanks Axel and Hunter for your nice comments about my story. I'm glad that you have a great time reading it.

    Max

    in reply to: A.D. 3 – Despair (Completed) #16624
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    Despair
    By Max

    Part 5

    "This is what I was waiting for" smiled Erin as she stepped
    between her no longer twin and the imminent attack of Alyssa.
    She received the impact right on her chest.

    The force of the punch sent at Erin and Dory flying across the
    room. Using Samantha's power, Dory was able to phased
    through the marble stairs preventing any harm at her body,
    while Erin smashed them violently. Her invulnerability didn't
    let her feel the pain to be buried by the collapsing stairs over
    her body.

    Dory emerged from the destroyed stairs in her ethereal form
    with a big grin in her face. "You shouldn't have done that, but
    I'm glad that you did it. With that punch of hate you have
    sealed your doom" laughed Dory. "How do you feel down
    there sis?" she asked.

    "Extremely… POWERFUL!!" roared Erin as free herself from
    her prison causing a great blast. Moving fast Alyssa covered
    the body of the drained man and the woman with her own body
    as the pieces of marble flew through the house making holes in
    the walls as they were cannonballs.

    Once the dust settled down, Alyssa could see at Erin standing
    in the crater she had just made. She looked around and watch
    pleased the destruction she unleashed over the house.

    "Did I do all of that?" she said sounding very innocent. "I
    simple pushed a little with my hands and the fragments over
    me flied away" she giggled. Then, smiling wickedly she added
    "Now imagine what I could do if I really put an effort".

    "I won't let you do it. I will stop you right here, right now" said
    Alyssa raising from the floor

    In a quick move, Erin dodged and hit hard Alyssa's stomach.
    Alyssa gasped as she felt something she hadn't feel in a long
    time. Pain.

    "This is impossible" said Alyssa as she coughed some blood.
    "My skin is so dense that I can resist the fire power of a tank.
    How did you become so strong?" gasped Alyssa.

    "That, my dear foe, is the last piece of our plan" smiled Dory.
    "Making you feel guilty about draining at that man was only
    the beginning. Those guilty feelings made you incapable of
    helping at Etheria in a fight against us. That was why she lose
    and became part of me".

    "The final part of our plan was to force you to use all your
    strength, because only by doing that, any possibility of defeat
    us will ended" said Erin. "You will see AD, my first power is
    not being super strong. It's the ability to increase my strength
    according to the amount of force my body is hit"

    "I have being beating some football players in order to call
    your attention as well as to increase my strength. When we
    fight at the gym, I couldn't make you hit me, but when you
    manage to stop my punch, the resistance that you put to stop
    me really improved my strength greatly. The punches Etheria
    unleashed on my body help me to reach a level of strength
    greater than her, but still I wasn't a match for you" said Erin.

    "That was why I teased you by absorbing at Samantha. To put
    you at the limit of your anger and frustration. Only in that
    moment you will liberate your whole power allowing at my
    sister to overwhelm your levels of strength" said Dory.

    "Indeed. It's hard to describe the incredible strength that is
    cursing in my body now. It's burning every cell of my body,
    making me stronger than you AD. You can imagine how eager
    I'm to test this strength against the people who will raise
    against us" laughed Erin.

    "Now that Etheria is no longer around, you won't be able to
    take our powers. And since your power allows you to drain
    muscle tissue, I guess that it will be of little use against my
    sister. She barely has some. Her strength resides on her power"
    smiled Dory.

    "I don't need my absorption powers to stop her" said Alyssa as
    electrical charges came out of the electrical plugs and hit at
    Erin. The most powerful woman in the world yelled of the
    terrible pain she was suffering.

    "Maybe she is invincible, but certainly she is not immortal.
    Now, released at Samantha or I will…" threaded Alyssa.

    "Or you will do what? Kill at my sister? Will your hate will
    push you to do such terrible thing" said Dory.

    Alyssa felt herself trapped. No matter how much she wanted it,
    she wouldn't allow herself to fall at their level. With regret, she
    stopped using her power over the electricity and Erin was free.

    "That really hurt me bitch!!" yelled Erin as she hit at Alyssa
    with enough strength to compressed a whole heavy armoured
    vehicles to the size of a grape.

    This time, it was Alyssa the one who was sent across the room.
    She destroyed tables and the furniture that was on her flying
    path.

    "That was very easy" smiled Erin as she slowly walked were
    the defeat heroin laid. Dory floated at her side.

    The sisters smiled as they saw at Alyssa laying on the floor.
    "She is no longer a threat for us" said Dory as she used her
    telekinesis powers to levitated at Alyssa from the floor.

    "Think again" said Alyssa as she threw plasma balls against the
    sisters. The sisters were taken by surprise and received the
    impact directly.

    "I will stop you no matter what" said Alyssa as she wave down
    her hands in front of Erin. Suddenly Erin fell on her knees and
    then collapsed over the floor. "Let's see how you can move
    your body now that I have increased the force of gravity on you
    by a factor of 10 millions" said Alyssa to Erin.

    "And for you" said Alyssa turning her attention to Cory.
    "Samantha could be trapped inside you, but I bet that as long as
    I don't kill you, she will be fine. Well, let see how much pain
    can you stand" said Alyssa as her hands glowed bright red.

    "Did you forget that I can nullified your powers?" said Cory
    applying her power over Alyssa.

    With her hands returning to normal, Alyssa said "You can
    avoid that I use my powers over you, but since the strength I
    have gained is not a power, I still can use it on you" said
    Alyssa.

    "Not while I'm around" said Erin as she hit at Alyssa hard.
    "With your powers cancelled, your gravity increased is no
    longer affecting me. Now, let me show you what real pain is"
    grinned Erin.

    A tremendous fight took place on that house. Erin and Alyssa
    didn't hesiate in use all their strength against each other.
    Alyssa knew that is she hit at Erin directly, she will only make
    her stronger. So she decided to use other tactics.

    Digging her hands on the floor, Alyssa extracted a part of it
    making a huge hole. Then, she launched the heavy object
    against Erin.

    "Don't make me laugh" said Erin as she stopped the object
    with her hand. She closed her fist and the piece was
    transformed in dust.

    Taking advantage of the dust curtain, Alyssa moved around
    Erin and got on her back. 'If I applied enough strength, maybe
    I could dozed her up before she turns stronger' thought Alyssa.

    With a vigorous grip, Alyssa locked her arm around Erin's
    neck. "It's time to sleep Erin" said Alyssa as she applied great
    amounts of strength.

    "Good thinking AD" said Erin as she tensed her neck muscles.
    "But you can't apply enough strength to overpower me" she
    said as she use her elbow to hit Alyssa's breasts

    The impact was so strong that it took out the air of Alyssa's
    lungs. While she gasped for air, she broke her embrace over
    Erin.

    "And now, you go down" said Erin as she grabbed at Alyssa by
    her neck and pulled her over her body to launch her on the
    floor.

    The heroin gasped and fell unconscious.

    "Finally. I thought you will never defeat her" said Dory
    impatiently.

    "Relax sis. There was no way I could lose the match. My
    power really was generous with me. It grant me a strength
    superior at the one AD gathered together. It will take me a time
    to get use at this kind of strength. I can crashed an army as easy
    as you can kill a fly. It really excites me the idea of seeing the
    terror in the eyes of the soldiers that will fight against us as I
    destroy their toys by merely using my bare hands" grinned
    Erin.

    "Yes, we will be unstoppable" said Dory as she floated at
    Alyssa's side. "Once I fully absorb at Absolute Drainer, I will
    not only gain all her extraordinary strength, but combining her
    powers with the ones I already have of Etheria, I will be able to
    extract the powers of every enhance women that will dare to
    stop us" laughed Dory.

    She descended on the floor and grabbed at Alyssa by her arms.
    Dory smiled as she realized that Alyssa was regaining her
    conscious. "It's time that you join at your friend inside me.
    Soon, you and I will be one and the whole world will tremble
    of fear as the enhanced women will take control of the world"
    laughed maniacally Dory.

    Through the hole on the roof that Samantha made, the sisters
    saw the sky getting dark as thunders rumbled in their ears.
    Suddenly a lightning descend from the sky and hit at Dory
    right on her chest sending her backwards.

    "You won't prevail" said a young woman that descend through
    the roof's hole. With a move of her hand, the sky turned clear
    again. "I have come for you" she said.

    To be continued…

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    Debbie was the first to wake up. She yawned loudly as she stretched her arms and legs. When she opened her eyes, she couldn’t avoid smiling at how cute Larry looked sleeping over her. He was sleeping deeply with his head in middle of her breasts.

    A cold breeze swept the room making Larry chilled. He cuddled against Debbie, enjoying her pleasing corporal heat. If Larry will be awake, he will tell that he never felt so warm and safe in his life.

    Giving at him a kiss on top of his head, Debbie pulled the sheets over her lover and then she accommodate her pillow to continue sleeping.

    ‘Sheets!! Pillow!!’ screamed Debbie’s mind as she zapped out of her dreaming state. With her eyes wide opened, Debbie realized they were no longer in the dressing room. “Where are we this time?” wondered aloud Debbie as she scanned the room.

    “It looks like a bedroom” said Debbie as she saw a nightstand next to the bed, a big closet, a desk with a computer on it. “Oh my…!! This is my bedroom!!” gasped Debbie as even the room was totally unknown for her, her memories indicated her the contrary.

    Then, Debbie covered her mouth as she realized that her loudly comments were about to wake up at Larry. She gently caressed his hair and he fell again in his deep sleep.

    “That was close” whispered Debbie as Larry buried his head on her cleavage.

    Suddenly, a sense of proud took at Debbie for surprise. A feeling that she was beginning to get used to. She never before had a strong reason to be proud of herself, but now, having at Larry sleeping peacefully over her as the result of making love to her for the first time with a body that drives him crazy was a very powerful reason to feel proud of.

    She took a moment to stare at the golden ring wrapping her finger. Even she had used its power several times now, Debbie still find hard to believe that such small circular object had helped her to become the woman she was.

    “I better prepare some tea to drink” smiled Debbie as she noticed that the sunset through her window. “Funny. I don’t remember my window faced at the sunset” said Debbie.

    Moving slowly, she managed to put at Larry on her bed as she quietly slid out of it. Once Debbie was sure that Larry was warm by enveloping him with the sheets, she took the time to check her room.

    “This room is completely different at my original one. To begin with is more spacious” said Debbie surprised by the space she know possessed. She opened her closet and gasped at the beautiful clothes that were hanging on there.

    “This is incredible” gasped Debbie as she noticed the variety of her clothes. “I didn’t imagine to have many outfits and of such good quality and taste” said Debbie marveled.

    “There is no way, this room belongs to my house” said Debbie as she noticed the different measures of her room. “This could only mean one thing” she said walking to the window.

    “Oh! This feels great” said Debbie as her body was bathed with the last sunrays of the day. She stretched her extremities again and flexed her muscles enjoying the power sensations they gave her. For an odd reason, she felt her muscles aching.

    That sensation disappeared as she felt herself being re-energized. As if her bulging muscles were collecting the last vestige of energy the sun was giving. She kept her pose for a few seconds before letting her body rest. “I definitely can get used to this” smiled Debbie.

    Once she finished her sunbath, Debbie watched what was beyond her window.

    “As I presumed. I’m no longer in my normal neighborhood” said Debbie as she observed the different residences nearby. “It seems that my family economic status was affected by this chances too” she said observing the wide yard her house had. “I better check this new house first hand” said Debbie avoiding the use of her new memories.

    She picked out a silk rope that was hanging on her chair, slipped her feet on a pair of sandals and after giving a warm kiss on Larry’s forehead, she moved to the door.

    As she did it, she saw that Larry’s clothes were disseminated on the floor as well as some gym clothes that should belong to her. ‘I’m glad that in this reality Larry and I enjoyed our first lovemaking too’ thought Debbie as she stepped out of the room.

    “Hello princess” greeted her a man that was passing in front of her room.

    Debbie was shocked to see an Apache man as. His kindness face made impossible for Debbie to mistaken him. “Hi dad” said Debbie as natural as possible. ‘What’s going on here? Why my father is in home at this hour? Not to mention his height and ethnic’ wondered Debbie.

    “Is everything fine? You normally don’t leave your room for a few hours after working out” said the Apache man.

    “I’m just a bit thirsty. That’s all” smiled Debbie as she tried to avoid that her father realized that Larry was sleeping in her room. ‘Maybe the reality had change the way dad looks like, but he will certainly kill me if he finds out that Larry is in my room’ she thought.

    “Glad to know that everything is alright. I was worry that maybe Larry finally wasn’t able to keep up with you” laughed the father.

    “What do you mean?” blushed Debbie.

    “Well, you know. Since he isn’t as strong as you, maybe you finally injured him or something like that during your sex session” he said.

    “DAD!!” yelled Debbie. Her ears couldn’t believe what she had just heard.

    “Don’t blame me. I told you that you must be gentle with him after all. I can stand your mother’s rough games thanks to my height advance, but since you are physically superior in every way at Larry, you must be careful not to hurt him”

    “Yes dad. I know” said Debbie as she quickly search in her memories. He suppressed her surprise as she learned that in this reality, she and Larry have sex whenever they can, usually after she is done with her workout, so her muscles are pumped up.

    “That explains the gym clothes and my soaring muscles” whispered Debbie.

    “What did you say?” asked her father.

    “Nothing dad!” quickly replied Debbie. “I was just feeling that my mout… I mean throa
 I mean…” blushed Debbie as she was trying to look for a word that didn’t express a sexual meaning. “I just need a glass of water. I’m thirsty” she finally said.

    “Oh yes. Sorry for delaying you” apologized the father. “By the way, your mother is on the first floor if you want to talk to her. Her client cancelled, so she has some free time. She must be practicing some routine in the gym are for sure.” said the father.

    “Thank. I will see her” said Debbie. ‘Do we have a gym area?’ thought Debbie.

    As she was descending the stairs to the first floor, Debbie couldn’t resist taking a look at her memories about her parents. She gasped at the changes they have suffered.

    It seems that her ethnic transference affected at her mother and father too. Not to mention at her ancestors. Her father was an Apache, while her mother was a Navajo. So, as result she was a 100% Indian girl. “Not Navajo. Din’e” said Debbie to herself, remembering what her mother explained to her about her heritage.

    Din’e people are called Navajo due an error during the meet of the first white man with one of the indian people. The white man asked for the name of his Indian name and he responded with an invitation to sit by his fire. Not speaking the language and only being able to understand the  bits that were similar to other Indian dialects he spoke, the white man misunderstood and thought Din'e Indians were Navajo, which is their word for fire. The Din'e use the name now as all white people call them that. They find it very amusing to be called "fire".”

    Putting that thought aside, Debbie realized that the other changes she applied on her body resulted in the modifications of the genetic of her parents. According to her new memories, it looks like that her height, intelligence and confident personality came from her father side as he was a very successful businessman that manage all his business from home.

    “That will explain why he is so open minded toward my relationship with Larry” said Debbie. “He mentioned that my mom like to play rough games, what did he mean?”

    In an instant, Debbie knew that her mother was a fitness instructor. As such, she had lean muscles and not big muscles, but she certainly knew how to use them. “So, my exercise determination, fashion sense and body development came from my mother” said Debbie.

    She quickly realized the meaning of her last statement. “Oh my…” gasped Debbie as she visualized how her mother looked like in this reality. “There is no way my mother could be like that” she said. “Well, there is only a way to find it out” smiled Debbie as she rushed down the stairs to the gym area.

    Quietly, she gave a look inside the gym area and watched at her mother running on the treadmill. Debbie couldn’t believe what her eyes were seeing.

    There was her mother, but no the mother she remembered. Now she was a Navajo woman, half feet shorter and with a pair of breasts that were almost as big as hers. As she run, Debbie appreciate how gratefully her mother swung her prominent and well formed rear from one side to the other as her heavy bust jiggled up and down.

    “Oh! Hi Debbie. I didn’t see you” greeted her mother as she stepped out of the treadmill. “Are you here to pump up more iron, aren’t you?” she asked.

    “I…” doubted Debbie what to say. Then her body tingled of the excitement to get down of a bar and lift heavy weight over her. “Yeah” she finally replied.

    Debbie didn’t know if what she was feeling was part of Trisha’s dedication to exercise or her own enthusiasm to discover how strong she was. ‘Maybe a combination of both’ thought Debbie as she laid on the bench under the weight bar.

    “That’s my girl. Just let me adjust the weight for you. Most of my clients can’t lift the weight you do” giggled the mother.

    ‘She must to be kidding me’ thought Debbie as she realized that the bar had a considerable amount of weight over it. Even so, her mother added two more plates to it. “You don’t think this is too heavy?” asked Debbie to her mother.

    Her mother gave her a confused look. She checked the weight of the bar. “No. It’s the usual weight you lift for warming up. Then, I will add the other four plates to let you reach your limit. Don’t worry” she said.

    ‘Four more!!’ gasped Debbie in her mind. ‘There is no way I could be that strong’ she thought. ‘Well, there is only a way to find it out’.

    Taking a deep breath, Debbie held the bar tightly and then pushed it up. To her surprise the bar didn’t felt as heavy as she thought. ‘It’s true. I can lift it’ she was shocked. She lowered the bar on top of her breasts and then pulled it up. She smiled widely as she held firmly the bar on the air.

    Convinced that her arms were able to carry that weight, Debbie began to do reps. Each time she watched excited at how her muscles got tensed with the exercise, bulging with power as she lifted the heavy bar over and over again. Debbie discovered that she really liked to be strong.

    After finishing what she considered a nice warm up, she put the bar back in place. She seated in the bench and flexed her arm to see how big her bicep grew. She touched it gently feeling how warm and sore it was. She never had thought about it before, but having being muscles wasn’t as bad as she thought.

    “Very impressive Debbie” said the mother. “You are always getting stronger with each passing day. And look at you with those big and sexy muscles over you. You really will put jealous at some bodybuilders I know” said the mother. Debbie blushed at the comment.

    “Looking at you with building muscle everyday makes me very jealous. It seems that you got the ability to grow muscles from your father because no matter how hard I work, I can’t get nothing more than this” said the mother flexing her arm. A small, but hard bicep bulged on it.

    “At least, I’m happy that you inherited the best features of my side of the family” said the mother as she cupper her daughter’s breasts.

    “MOM!!” yelled Debbie embarrassed.

    “Oh, you don’t need to be embarrassed. After all…” said the mother and then whispered “… you blossomed bigger than your mother, but remember, no a word” said the mother blinking an eye.

    “Don’t worry mom. I won’t tell at anyone” said Debbie even more embarrassed about the latest revelation. Then a faint smile formed on her lips.

    “That’s my girl” cheered up the mother. “So, what do you want part of your body want to warm up now? Maybe you want to work out your gluts to have them firmer. I have seen at Larry checking you a lot that area”.

    Debbie was about to say something at her mother, when she remembered that Larry was still sleeping upstairs. ‘If he wakes up, he will be very confused about where is he’ thought Debbie feeling guilty about leaving alone at Larry in this new reality.

    “It will have to wait for later mom. I have a few things to take care about now” said Debbie kissing at her mother in the cheek. She found amusing how much she had to bend down in order to kiss at her mother.

    “Yes, you better hurry. Your agent must be here in an hour, right?. I would love to go with you at the presentation, but I have two appointments that I couldn’t cancel. I promise I will go with you next time, OK?” said the mother.

    “Sure mom. Don’t worry” said Debbie leaving the room. ‘Agent?, presentation? What is going on?’ wondered Debbie as her mind raced to find the answers. “Oh my…!!” gasped Debbie as she found the answers. “Larry is going to die when he knows this
” she grinned.

    Debbie was pleased to find at Larry still sleeping in her bed. As soon as she joined him, she found herself enveloped in Larry’s tender embrace. Debbie felt her heart skip a bit at such lovely act of affection.

    Kissing him, she began to wake up him. Her intents were successfully and slowly Larry opened her eyes. “Good morning darling. It’s time to wake up” said Debbie with her melodically voice.

    “Hello Debbie” said Larry half slept. “Can we stay like this for a few more minutes? I was having a great dream” he said.

    “Sure baby. Everything you want” whispered Debbie. “Can you share your dream with me?” said Debbie curious.

    “I was dreaming about finally making love to you” whispered Larry as he tried to sleep again.

    “Oh!” exclaimed Debbie. “Tell me more” she said.

    “Well, I dream about you teasing me with your strong body and then I began to oil you getting us very horny and then you and I couldn’t hold our passion any longer and we did it” said Larry.

    Debbie giggled. “That wasn’t a dream. It really happened Larry” she said.

    “What?!” said Larry waking up fully. “Did I… and you… together…” babbled Larry as he was remembering what they did movements ago.

    “Yes Larry. You loved me and I loved you back. We finally make love together” smiled Debbie with a warm smile.

    “But…, but…, we didn’t use protection. You can get pregnant” said Larry worried.

    “I promised that I will take care of that, didn’t I?” said Debbie. “I only need to acquire the protection tendencies of Carol to avoid get pregnant. That girl doesn’t like to take risks. But don’t worry, she is a virgin, so won’t get pregnant for what I took from her” smiled Debbie.

    “Glad you could think in something like that” smiled Larry. Then, resting on Debbie, he whispered “Because I enjoyed a lot loving you without restrictions”.

    “I enjoyed it a lot too” smiled Debbie as they share a passionate kiss.

    After breaking a long kiss, Larry said “So, how much the reality changed this time? For the look of your room, I will say that a lot” said Larry.

    “Indeed, but before you can access at your alternatives memories, let me tell you something that will shocked you. Besides the fact that we are having sex almost everyday, it seems that in this reality I have begun the live of a fitness model”.

    “What?” asked Larry.

    “Remember the tournament we were in moments ago. Well, in this reality we left the stadium after I won. It was then when a modeling agent spotted us. He worked for a modeling company that wanted to get more women involved in fitness and encourage women to build muscle” ” explained Debbie.

    “He was impress by the combination of female curves and muscle development my body has. He offered me a job as a model and you convinced me to accept it. Then, we return home and I worked out a bit before we have sex” blushed Debbie.

    “That is interesting” said Larry. “So, we are having sex regularly” said Larry overwhelmed.

    “You didn’t hear a word of what I said about the agent, right?” said Debbie.

    “I did. But you must admit that it was a great surprise to know something like that” he said.

    “Yes darling and by my memories, I assure you that you were great every time” smiled Debbie. Then she thought ‘I think there is no better time to put my plan to work’.

    Looking at him at the eyes, she asked “Are you ready for another surprise?”. Larry nodded. “Good. Remember when the soap fell in the shower?”

    “I can’t forget it” sighed Larry as he was mentally drooling at his memory image of Debbie’s great ass.

    “That was a distraction” smirked Debbie. “Moments before the soap slipped from me. I was thinking in a way to get you out of your hideout when a boldly plan took form in my mind. The plan was so good, that I decided to save it for later. Instead, I took the course of action you already experienced” she smiled.

    “So, how exactly the soap participate in your plan?” asked Larry intrigued

    “Well, I was keeping you busy as I did very quick swaps with the ring. You certainly didn’t notice a thing” giggled Debbie.

    Larry blushed as he couldn’t deny it. “In that case, you were very effective” he smiled. “What did you do as I was starin… cough… distracted” coughed Larry.

    “Since you gave me the ring, I propose myself to find a way to bend your rule. I have done it a few times so far” said Debbie proud of her intellect. “Right now, I have the best traits my classmates had to offer, and because of that, I can’t improved more, right?”

    “Right” replied Larry.

    “Wrong!!” exclaimed Debbie. “Just because I’m now the tallest, bustiest, strongest, smartest, and sexiest girl of my class, that doesn’t mean that nature can bless at other girl” said Debbie.

    “I must admit that you found very interesting ways to increase your height as well as the size of your muscles, but it will be difficult that a girl can get better than you. Nature isn’t so generous. In fact, I don’t think that there should be a girl that can even reach your development” said Larry.

    “You always saying the right words” blushed Debbie. “You are right about being difficult that a girl could match these measures, but you are also right about Nature. What about if I swap the generosity that Nature can give at other girl?” asked Debbie.

    “I… I… don’t know” muttered Larry trying to comprehend what Debbie was saying.

    “It’s simple. What makes the body grows? Growth Spurts. I know that I was an early bloomer so I don’t have more growth spurts, but what about if I swap my body development with a late bloomer?”

    “That will mean that you could…” gasped Larry as he realized what Debbie’s plan.

    “Yes, I could destroy your rule once for all” grinned Debbie. “When you were busy staring at my rear, I swapped ages with a girl that was a year younger than I. Then, I swapped again with Hailey, a girl that starts to develop last year, forcing at her development to regress. Doing that, I returned all the physical traits I took to their respective owners and swapped the dormant body developed that Hailey had. Finally I recover all the traits I returned again. And I did all while you were enjoying my Indian rear ” giggled Debbie.

    “That is very impressive Debbie. Definitely it’s going to be a good year. It will be awesome to see your getting more voluptuous as the time pass” smiled Larry.

    “Sorry darling, but that won’t be possible” said Debbie. “Because I will start to blossom right now!!” said Debbie as she concentrated in getting the age of a classmate one year older than her.

    “Oh my…!!” gasped Larry as what it seemed impossible was happening in front of his eyes. He found himself getting harder as Debbie was increasing her already impressive beauty. Her feminine figure was becoming simple breathtaking as her curves became more pronounced. Even her muscles were increasing again as she was gaining a year of training.

    “Oh yes!!!” moaned Debbie in pleasure as her body was changing. “Look at me Larry. I’m growing again” grinned Debbie as she was raising again. “Did I mentioned that Hailey grew almost 7 inches in the last year?” giggled Debbie as Larry was getting shorter and shorter. “Or that she grew a nice C-cup size in the same time?” smiled Debbie as she found her breasts growing heavier on her chest.

    Larry gulped hard as he was astonished at the great change his girlfriend was suffering. She found the way to overcome the restrictions on the ring and he couldn’t be happier that she did it.

    Soon, Debbie’s growth subsided as she became a year older. She took a deep breath as she felt her body finally resting. She couldn’t enjoy more the view she had in front of her, or better say down of her.

    “I don’t know about you Larry, but I find that my breasts have developed bigger than Valerie’s. You should be able to tell me since now that my height has grown even more, you are right under the level of my bust” giggled Debbie enjoying her superiority.

    “You are simple amazing Debbie. I love you” said Larry embracing at his amazon girlfriend.

    “And I love you too” she said picking him with her stronger arms to lift him at her lips level. “My little wizard” she giggled and kissed him on the lips.

    “Oh no!! I forgot about my test” gasped Larry remembering his course. “I must to go now Debbie, otherwise I won’t be able to pass my course” he said.

    Debbie put him back on the floor and with regret she took the one ring off. “Go and impress them Larry” she said giving him the ring.

    “Don’t worry. I will” said Larry blinking and eye and then vanished in the air.

    Alone in her room, Debbie found the time to check out the body she now possessed. Standing in front of a full-body mirror, she was shocked at the image displayed on it.

    “Holy…!!! That is me!! No way!!!” gasped Debbie as she couldn’t believe what her eyes were seeing. “I’m gorgeous!! I look like one of those anime girls!!” exclaimed Debbie as she was astonished by her impressive endowments. “Just that I’m 100% real” she smirked.

    As she was intoxicated with her own image, the reality re-shaped itself. ‘I wonder what is going to happen now?’ thought Debbie as her room changed again.

    Half hour later, Debbie found herself driving her luxurious sport car. She still was trying to assimilate the changes the new reality brought with it. She was driving at very high speed in middle of a deserted highway. “I’m the queen of the world” she yelled aloud.

    “I see that you are having fun” said Larry as he materialized in the co-pilot seat.

    Debbie stepped on the brakes as Larry’s appearance made her jump. “Don’t do that again Larry? You really scared me” said Debbie parking at one side of the road.

    “Sorry baby. I was just too excited to show you this” said Larry as he showed off his wizard license.

    “That is great Larry. I congratulate you!!” said Debbie hugging at Larry in a strong embrace.

    “Thank you Debbie. I’m finally able to use freely all the magic and spells I have learned” said Larry as he materialized a well-know magazine of fitness and health. “By the way. You look very good in the cover” he said flipping the pages. “Whoa!! You look truly imposing and amazing in these pictures” gasped Larry as he watched at Debbie posing, flexing, but about all, smiling.

    “Yes, I’m the top model in this business” smiled Debbie as her curves and muscles were impossible to match. “My social life is busy, with many guys wanting to shove you out of the way and become my new boyfriend, but don’t worry baby. You have been and always be the only man for me” said Debbie kissing him.

    “I’m glad that you love me so much Debbie because I love you too Debbie. With some many girls that are jealous of your physical prowess as well as beauty, you have produced a new tendency. More women are trying to gain muscle everyday, and lots of it” Larry said.

    “Talking about jealousy, I can’t avoid feeling guilty when I recall in my memories the way my classmates have being looking me during my life. They have see me grew into the muscled bombshell I’m now, and I feel bad when in reality I have being growing the traits they born with. I don’t want to live with that in my conscience. I must say that this body is amazing, but it doesn’t belong to me. I will really like to restore at my classmates Larry, can you give me the ring to restore them?” asked Debbie.

    “Are you sure about it Debbie?” said Larry taking the ring out of his pocket. “Do you want to give your new life up?” he asked.

    “Yes. It will be the best” she said placing the ring in her finger. “Please kiss me one more time as I do the change” begged Debbie.

    The two lovers kissed passionately and a tear dropped from Debbie’s eyes as the ring glowed. When Debbie broke the kiss she saw at Larry grinning. It was then she noticed that her body didn’t change. “What happened? Why I not back to normal” asked Debbie.

    “You passed!!” he smiled.

    “I passed? I passed what?” asked Debbie confused.

    “The test of my teacher. He told me that my ring was very powerful and that I was a very naive to trust its power over a simple human, please don’t offense. I told him that you were trusty and he grabbed the ring and put a new spell on it. He told me that if you were greedy and use the ring to obtain more traits, you will lose them all. But if you were honest and you use the ring to return the traits to their owners, you will keep the traits and your friends will be magically restored. Wait and see” said Larry.

    In that moment, the reality re-shaped and Debbie smiled as her new memories let her knew that all her classmates were restored to the way they should be.

    “It seems that now I took martial arts classes to be more flexible and to be able to tone her body. From there, I became interested in getting stronger and began weight lifting and one thing lead to the one. To resume, I started being highly insecure, but became extremely confident in myself as I went through life” smiled Debbie. “That is a nice change”

    Turning the engine on, Debbie returned to the highway and gave a u-turn to return at home. “And now Larry, what do you want to do? Have sex with me all night?” said Debbie very horny.

    “Sounds good, but I was thinking that it will be better if we fly in your private jet to Paris and we get marry there” said Larry as he passed his hand over the one ring and it became in an engagement ring. “Will you like to be my wife?” he asked.

    “I will. I will!!” cried in joy Debbie as she saw the beautiful ring on her finger. Then she had a sad expression in her face. “But I don’t have a private jet” she said.

    Larry moved his hand and the sport car became a private jet. Debbie found herself with her lover enjoying a nice bath in the jacuzzi inside the plane. “Champagne for the trip?” Larry asked at Debbie as he materialized two glasses filled of the exquisite drink.

    “Oh Larry. This is wonderful” said Debbie amazed by Larry’s powers. “Now that you are my powerful wizard, you give me everything I want right?” Debbie said seductively.

    “Anything you want” he replied.

    “You know how to make a hot woman be even hotter for you” said Debbie as she started to kiss him passionately, pressing her tall and voluptuous body against his own as her muscled arms hug him tightly.

    Larry manage to press the button of the intercom next to the jacuzzi. “To Paris” he muffled as Debbie didn’t want to stop kissing him.

    “Right away sir” said the pilot as the jet rose from the highway into the deep sky.

    The End.

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