[Max]

To be honest, I must say that this is one of the best stories I have read from you my friend.

You are a great writer and I love to read your stories, even if they turn very long. I still remember when I was following the pieces of Alt. Universes.

You know my tastes, but what ever you decide to write is fine with me. I’m just glad that you share your wonderful work with us. Specially with a complicated plot like Pendant Changes is.

Please continue working in Pendant Changes. I will really like to know how all of this will end. You have set a great scenario and seeing the different points of view (gentle and violent) is doing the story extremelly interesting.

I think it will be just a matter of time before Michelle discovers that what happen to her pendant is related to the visit Cindy and Joe did to the basement.

Max

[Max]

To: Marilyn Knewsome (marknew742@gmail.com)

From: Esmeralda and Peter

Note: This is the transcription of a voice email.

— Start of the Message —

*A background clicking noise*

Peter: Hello Ms. Knewsome. This is Peter, remember me?

Esmeralda: *panting* Are you recording the reply

message without me?

*a strong noise is heared* CLUNK!

Peter: Well, you were so busy breaking my lifting

record, that I didn’t want to bother you.

Esmeralda: *giggling* Did I hear an envious tone in

your voice?

Peter: Don’t envious, flattered. Honestly, seeing that

you struggled at first to lift the bar with my weight

mark made me feel proud.

Esmeralda: *purring* And how my strong man felt when

my girly muscles could match your mark and then passed

it?.

Peter: *exagerate gulping* a bit frigthning.

Esmeralda: *gasping* Really?

Peter: *laughing* Of course not. It was the most

incredible experience in my life. In just a two hours,

you were able to do what took me two years to achieve.

Esmeralda: *giggling* I guess, I’m better than you.

*a punch is heared*

Peter: Ouch!! Easy girl. You can break me an arm now.

*sighing and rubbing noises* That will let me a bruise

Esmeralda: Sorry Peter. I was just playing a bit. I

forgot that I’m stronger than I was 2 hours ago.

*kissing noises* There. Mommy kisses will help you to

heal faster.

Peter: Thanks mommy. I feel much better now. What

about if like a good mommy, you take care of your

little and weak baby.

Esmeralda: What about if we finish the message for

Marilyn first?

Peter: Sh*t! I forgot about it. It will take me a

second to delete it and start a new one *keyboard

noise*

Esmeralda: No! Leave it that way. At Ms. Knewsome will

like to hear how good we are doing now.

Peter: I bet she will. Well, hello again Ms. Knewsome.

Sorry for wandering around, but I wan…

Esmeralda: WE want… *sighing* Men don’t have modals.

Hello Marilyn. This is Esmeralda. We want to thank you

for helping us with our relationship.

Peter: Yes. We do exactly what you tell us to do. We

opened to each other and everything worked

wonderfully.

Esmeralda: I must say that knowing that Peter didn’t

hate the way of my body looks was gratifiting, but knowing

that he likes strong woman was a very interesting

revelation.

Peter: I couldn’t be happier. I’m glad that Esmeralda

didn’t react wrong at my little confession. The true

is that I love her as whole and not for the size of

her muscles. Enven they look very impressive now.

Esmeralda: *pouting* More than my breasts. Let me arch

my back so you can take a good look of them. See how

big and round they are. Bigger than the first

time you see them, right?

Peter: *gulping hard* Indeed. Would you mind flexing

your arm to see which is bigger.

Esmeralda. Suit yourself. *a streching sound is

heared*

Peter: Whoa!! You are going to ripped of your shirt!!.

Esmeralda: I wasn’t trying, but I like the idea.

*grunting and streching sounds are heared*

Peter: This is f*cking amazing!!!

*an aloud moan and ripping sounds*

Esmeralda: *gasping* It’s done. Pheeew!! That piece of

fabric didn’t have a chance agaisnt my hard muscles

and migthy breasts.

Peter: *babling incoherent words*

Esmeralda: *gigling* I will take that as an ‘I like

it’

Peter: *more babling*

Esmeralda: *purring* Well baby. Compose yourself that

mommy want to show you how much she loves you. Are you

ready?

Peter: Ready and able!!!

Esmeralda: Well Ms. Knewsome, as you have heared,

Peter and I are very happy now. The reason of why we

are recording this message is to thank your help.

After Peter and I talked about ourselves, we also

confess asking you advices. We embarrased for awhile

for how silly we should sounded for you, but we

realized that thanks to you we were honest to each

other.

Peter: Yes Ms. Knewsome. We know that you should be

dealing with all kind of comments about the Changes.

Mostly bad I premuse. We hope that our message bring

to you the hapiness of knowing that your advices were

well received and appreciated.

Peter and Esmeralda: And yes. We won’t forget about

the birth control!! *laughs*

— End of the message —

[Max]

Interesting chapter. The poor little man feel even smaller while the doctor is enjoying her new power and body.

I’m glad that you decided to re-take this story Axel3.14. Thank you so much.

Max

[Max]

Can she be more teasing? 😀 I bet she can.

Max

[Max]

Additionally, in FMG stories, almost all brother characters are rarely explored except as punching bags, weakness-riddled foils to enhance their sisters’ awesomeness, or sometimes ,as in Matt and Emma, sources of muscle.

That reminds me ‘Wish Book’. It is/was (depending if it’s continued or not) a great story about a brother and sister.

Thanks a lot for this chapter and I will be waiting to know the path this story will take.

Max

[Max]

Outstanding chapter Axel3.14. Thanks a lot for it.

Now, I can’t wait to see how Tommy and Maria end up.

Max

[Max]

Thanks. I’m glad you enjoy it.

Max

[Max]

Interesting chapter. Poor Tommy. It seems that having muscles was not a good idea. I wonder what he is going to do now.

Thanks Axel3.14 for this chapter.

Max

[Max]

Thanks for the update. How sad that we won’t be able to play 🙁 . He could have score nice records.

Max

[Max]

a nurse overshadowing him

Could be? 😀

Thanks for this piece. Interesting reactions of his new muscles.

Max

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