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ParticipantNumber 4 all the way!!!!!!!!!!!! 😮 😮 😮 ;D
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ParticipantI'm hooked!!!
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Participantshe's just gorgeous, and evidently VERY strong. 8)
That's enough for me… ;D
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ParticipantCrush can have her way with me anytime…! ;D
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Participant😮 😮 😮 😮 😮 😮 😮 😮
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Participanti would hope to see a series of stories(using different characters or the same ones)
Thanks Brian! I'm all written out at the moment, but this sounds like a perfect opportunity for a bit of FanFic based on this story. That'd be fine by me… ;D
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ParticipantMerci viel mahl Hunter. 😉 Glad you enjoyed it as much as I do.
Ciao!
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ParticipantGorgeous:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jKYwWU-7jf0&feature=related
Deeply impressive, but not so gorgeous:
I think a better example:
Gorgeous: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9sH6WE3suAQDeeply impressive, but not so gorgeous: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hGfctUXDBf0&feature=related
I did a webcam sesion with her last night, and she did have impresve bicep. unfortunatly one was in a cast.
This new girl. Did she really seem to be 190 pounds of massive cutie…? Too bad about the injury. Any idea as to who she is? ???
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ParticipantSweet! Very Nice.
By the way, how do you make an animated .GIF? ??? ??? ???
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ParticipantI know exactly what you mean about proofing — there's always a little tweak to be made
I generally complete a story days before I post it in order to give it some time to age and mature in my own head, and obviously to re-read it with a fresh eye and try to catch all those little tweaks. Even before I hit the post button I re-read it and still I find tweaks.
The best thing to do is to have someone else read it before you post it but not many of us have someone in our daily lives who'd be willing to do this and still remain our friends. With time you'll learn to self edit and catch the majority of those tweaks.
Maybe, CptMatt, this next time try letting the story simmer a bit in your brain after you're done writing the first draft…
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