[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

A most interesting and intriguing scenario, dear Axel.

I's do look forward to any future plays upon it.

Kudos unto you.

Peace
The Pimp NeonBlack

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

A most interesting and excellent tail, dear Kusanagi-kun.

I's especially like the references to the members and artist that do dwell upon this Forum within you words.

But my's major issue and commentry upon your work is that you tell too much and show little.

Such as comparing the voices and speaking styles of your characters to real life people.
You should consider merely modelling their dialogue more directly on these people then merely telling your ready who they sound like and how they speak -because it does damage the reader's investment in the reality you are attempting to create for them.

Same is for some of the detail within.
Instead of merely stating what a thing is and how it seems, try to imagine it within your own Mind's Eye and then try to discribe it to us. So we enter into your World and Imagination rather then you simple stating a projection of it.

Still, these matters aside, you have showed great flair and talent in your work and I's do so look forward to reading any more chapters that you do have planned.

I's do know that they shall be wonderful.

Peace
Neon

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

Most excellent work, dear Airnel.

Have you considering posting these on Brawna.org as of yet?
I's think that they will be most popular over there.

Kudos unto you, dear friend, and thank you for your impressive work.

Peace
Neon

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

Most interesting and excellent, dear Airnel.

Thank you for posting these new chapters.

Peace
Neon

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

A most interesting and excellent work, dear Rick.

Thank you for sharing it with us.

Peace
Neon

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

Again: most excellent, dear Zero.

I's especially favour the first of your latest batch.
Thank you.

Peace
The Pimp NeonBlack

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

Have already commented to you directly, dear Bee, but another compliment cannot hurt.

You have done a most excellent work with your manga and I's greatly look forward to reading more upon complition.

Kudos unto you, dear friend.

Peace
Neon

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

Most excellent, dear KtM.

I's am growing more and more intrigued about your tale and how it will unfold.

You have put much thought and planning into this work and for that you have my's praises.

Peace
The Pimp NeonBlack

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

Most interesting and mosy excellent, dear Angel.

Possibly the most unique rendering of dear David's most beloved character.

Thank you for creating and posting them.

Peace
The Pimp NeonBlack

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

Andrew: have already commented to you personally, but must say again how incredible your work is.

Thank you for sharing them with us.

Peace
Neon

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