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  • January 5, 2005 at 10:33 pm in reply to: Wednesday Teaser #2369
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    Ha! Thanks Mark. It’s looking great!!!

    January 5, 2005 at 7:24 pm in reply to: the virus #2101
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    I’m not much into wrestling stories, but those Amaflix stories by Roger Downs (?) are really, really fun.

    Btw, Mark Newman. What day is today? Oh…yes…it’s wednesday, isn’t it? 😉

    December 21, 2004 at 2:49 pm in reply to: The Blue Necklase Part 2 By Ristard McSean #2194
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    hmm…he’ll have a hard time explaining it to Sandy.

    There’s only one criticism I have to make in this chapter. The names Mandy and Sandy are just to much alike. I got confused a few times with it. And I think you switched them at one time too.

    I really look forward to reading more.

    ps: Any chance of a new Sexual Healing chapter?

    December 17, 2004 at 1:47 am in reply to: Paradise Plaza #2176
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    Wow! I love a mystery! I have to confess that I’m totally curious as well. Please continue it.

    December 8, 2004 at 1:56 am in reply to: the virus #2084
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    Why don’t you describe the story so that someone might know which story you’re talking about? It would help greatly.

    December 4, 2004 at 9:19 pm in reply to: Pendant Changes 5 (Tuesday) #818
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    Excellent! I can’t wait! It looks really promissing!

    I just hope you don’t go for the whole unrealistic approach like men become slaves, the first lady assumes the presidency and stuff like that.

    November 20, 2004 at 10:01 am in reply to: Power Play, chapter 7 #1819
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    I really don’t see what’s the big deal with nudity in a story. Unless you’re thinking of writing a children’s story , there’s nothing wrong with a little nudity. This is specially true when concerning fictional writing, since you can make whole sex scenes and not make it graphical or vulgar. It’s done all the time, in many, many main stream books.

    Now…if you’re going to describe in details the female genitalia, then I would agree with you on this, but otherwise, you’re displaying a "G.W. Bush" level of puritanism.

    November 3, 2004 at 10:43 pm in reply to: Power Play, chapter 7 #1808
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    Very nice!!! Very well written, as always.

    I only have one criticism. You could have put a more graphic description of Suzette and other females, along with more muscle interaction. It was a little too subtle for my taste (maybe also for others in this board). It would’ve been "hotter" if that was the case.

    Other then that…you write really well, and managed to create a really, really good character. Very well done! I’m anxious to read the sequel.

    October 15, 2004 at 9:18 pm in reply to: Pendant Changes 5 (Tuesday) #813
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    ahem….is wednesday coming anytime soon? This wait is unbearable!

    😉

    October 9, 2004 at 12:45 am in reply to: Power Play, chapter 6 #1723
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    Hehe! Excellent! I somehow knew he wouldn’t walk out of there looking like a hulk. 🙂

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