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  • in reply to: The Touch: part 9! Sorry for the massive delay. really. #14898
    El_Roy_1999
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    I really like it. Let's see some sibling rivalry!

    in reply to: A free sample. #16825
    El_Roy_1999
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    Nice. I like the growth description a lot. Very visual!

    in reply to: First attempt at a story #16660
    El_Roy_1999
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    I hope you enjoy this new stuff. She'll gain quite a bit soon.

    The strain

    Kim continued training alone for the next week. She soon became adroit at giving herself the injections, even though it cost her quite a little effort to do so. She was very careful as she remembered the numerous horror-stories Diego had told her about bench-pressing without a spotter. On the fifth day, she tried to put on her shirt after showering. For a while, she had been unable to pull it down in one movement. She had to pull the neck-hole open, lower the shirt on her shoulders and then push her arms through one at a time. Even though the shirt was meant to stretch, it felt like it was glued on. Even her training slacks had become ridiculously tight.
    This time, something incredible had happened. She had struggled with her clothes for a while. Once she felt all set, she flexed her back. Immediately, her latissimi blew apart into a large crab-like triangle, ripping her shirt to tatters. She looked at herself in the mirror, calmly removed the shreds of her garment and pulled out her cell-phone. Her recent visits to the clothes shop had led her to the conclusion that regular standards no longer applied. Men’s shirts were okay for the shoulders, but hung in front of her tight washboard stomach like curtains. Even at the sports shop, she had only found training clothes, which were beginning to feel tight. Indeed, her response to the chemicals had grown stronger and stronger. And so had she.
    “Nina, I need new clothes! Right now, I look awful.”
    And so do my breasts, she added mentally. Her implants were now sitting squat on top of her pectoral muscles, looking too small and bolted on. Luisa had been right: She would need some surgery.
    “No problem, come right over. I just have to take a look at you.”
    As she left the mansion, wearing a large sweatshirt, she felt oddly watched. In the shadows, there was a faint clicking.

    Measure of success

    After a short jog over to Nina’s house, Kim realised that she hadn’t even broken a sweat. She felt light and easy as if she had had a walk in the park. Still, she had run a kilometre in less than five minutes. She rang, and was up at the third floor in seconds. The security guard recognised her vaguely, but went back to work. She knocked.
    Nina opened the door in a flash:
    “Wow! You look awesome! I couldn’t have dreamt of anything like that. Come on in and… strip for me!”
    Kim raised her right eyebrow, surprised at her friend’s exhilaration. She took of her shoes and stepped inside. Nina’s apartment was decorated in a strict Asian style, according to Feng Shui and Japanese culture. It was Spartan yet still lively, mostly due to the masses of textiles lying around. A kettle of tea was steaming on a hot stone, probably heated in her superbly expensive electrical stove in her high-tech kitchen.
    Nina grabbed Kim’s sweatshirt and removed it with a quick pull. Her friend stood there mighty and braless. (She couldn’t find a fitting bra anywhere in town.)
    “I guess I see the problem, or should I say, the revelation of your utter muscular stylishness!”
    “Nina, are you all right? You’re a little over-exited, aren’t you?”
    “I think I am, yes, but hey, look at you. You’re no Schwarzenegger, but I never saw a girl like you in the flesh. Let me get my tape-measure.”
    She hurried off, leaving Kim flabbergasted. Seconds later, she emerged from her room and quickly danced around her friend, mumbling her measurements.
    “Chest: 42 inches, waist: 26”, hips: 36”. That’s not bad at all. You should lose the implants, though. They look stupid. Now, to your arms. Flex for me.”
    Kim did as asked, Nina wrapped the tape measure around her biceps than whispered:
    “16 inches. That’s awesome. And the calves are 16 inchers too. Now come on, flex your thigh. Let me get the tape around it and, tadaaa, 22” of leg. You’re huge!”
    “I guess I am. Look, could you get me clothes that fit me… and make them stretchable. I don’t think I’m done growing.”
    “I’ll see what I can do. Have some tea and tell me about training while I do some sketches.”

    in reply to: First attempt at a story #16658
    El_Roy_1999
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    I'm not offended at all. I wish I could write faster, so the story could go ahead!
    As has been said before, this next part is mostly for adults and not safe for work.

    The first stage of growth

    “OK, don’t move. And smiiile…”
    Kim snapped a picture of the smiling giant in front of her. Diego posed for her in his training slacks. He grinned at her, baring his teeth, and flexed his arm and shoulder muscles. She couldn’t wait to show these to Nina. The poor girl was completely overworked, following a big commission from the metropolitan theatre. They hadn’t seen each other for two weeks and the surprise was going to be great.
    “Wonderful. Now it’s my turn.”
    She gave him the camera, then struck the same pose. All over her body, her muscles bulged. Indeed, the last two weeks’ work had transformed her lithe frame into a powerful and shapely build. Her shoulders had broadened, her neck muscles had grown visibly, supporting her proud stance and noble attitude. Her long arms had become sinuous and strong. Most surprisingly, her pectoral muscles had evolved, pushing her implants outward, making them look strangely out of place. Below, a six-pack of abdominals was slowly becoming an eight-pack. Her legs had become strong and shapely, her knees slowly being overshadowed by her growing quadriceps. Finally, her calves were pushing outwards, showing first signs of splitting.
    Kim relaxed, preparing mentally for the next part of today’s training session. Over the last two weeks, Diego had relentlessly increased her workload, seeing that she was easily able to cope with the greater strain. As she pumped iron, feeling the tension build inside her, she noticed that her trainer was sweating more and more. Over the last week, she had felt a change in his approach. His coaching had become more “hands-on” and she noticed that his trousers had become wider. Just as he was counting repetitions, she had a faint impression of a growing hard-on.
    Facing several months of abstinence (Walter had tried a few times, but seemed to be unable to perform), she had bought a dildo, but it had never seen the action it saw in the last two weeks. Somehow, the whole situation was making her hornier and hornier.
    Later, when they were done training, she sat up and gave him a good look.
    “Diego.”
    “Yes?”
    He paused as he replaced the barbells onto their racks.
    “You seem to be really tense lately.”
    “It’s just that your training is harder than I expected, so I have more work. You’re growing very quickly, I’ve never seen anything like it.”
    “And you seem to like the look, don’t you?”
    “Well…” He looked sheepishly. “I must say that I’m surprised myself, but yes.” The last word came like a whisper. She smiled, then took his hand and led it to her biceps. He touched it lovingly.
    “We can turn off the lights if you don’t want to see my face…”
    They were now both speaking very softly, as if sharing some strange little secret. Inside Diego’s mind, his thoughts were speeding. What was happening? All the pain and suffering of his coming-out was being put into question. Why did he want this woman? She held him closely now, rubbing herself against his growing erection.

    Meanwhile:
    The spectators screamed in elation as the duel between the champion’s gigantic captain and the sorry challenger neared it’s zenith. Suddenly, the shorter opponent evaded his opponent’s defence and shot.

    A breach of taboo

    As Diego’s trousers quickly tented, she pulled them off and slid his dick out of his shorts. It surpassed even her most extreme fantasies. Deep down, she wondered if she’d be able to take it all in, but for the moment, the simple presence of a man was enough to make her hot. She licked lovingly along his shaft, increasing it’s hardness and making his cock-head bulge. Kim continued upwards along his member, circling it with her tongue. She could smell his pre-cum welling up. At last she took the head into her mouth, sucking it gently. Diego started grunting blissfully, then just as he seemed ready to blow, he pulled his penis out, calming down again.
    He bent down, removed her training clothes and pushed her down on the bench. Noticing his uneasiness, she quickly worked herself up, rubbing her clit, then prepared for his entrance. Diego still seemed uneasy. She caressed him gently leading him closer to her pussy. To entice him further, she flexed her abdominals, making a set of ridges appear where her stomach had been. She touched his muscles as he tensed, slowly pushing inside her. She felt a little uneasy as the huge monster inched inside her, when suddenly, something seemed to snap inside Diego’s mind. Her tightness came like a wave over him and he gripped her firmly, losing his mind. Within seconds he prepared to ram his whole shaft in her. It started to hurt. She felt unable to move, to contort into a better position and panicked.
    Twisting as good as she could, she pulled herself up, and bit him. The huge man just appeared to ignore this, pushing on. She screamed, shouted, howled at him, desperately trying to get some sense into him, when at last, she fell from the bench. As they both slipped, Diego hit his head on the weight stand and was knocked out. Concentrating, she managed to lift the giant a little bit, then rolled out from beneath him. As her mind grew fuzzy from the effort and her vision blurred, she decided that she’d get as strong as she could. This would never happen again.
    When Diego awoke, she was gone. Slowly regaining his senses, he went to the bathroom to throw up. After a while, he picked up his phone to call her, but there was no answer.

    in reply to: First attempt at a story #16655
    El_Roy_1999
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    Here's more. I'm not quite sure I'll be able to keep up at this speed, but I have the story all sketched, so I hope I'll do it well.
    Thank you for your nice comments. By the way, the next part will probably not be safe for work or minors, so please be careful.

    Happiness is a warm gun

    “So there’s four injections a day. I’m going to look like a junkie!”
    “Well, my beautiful, that’s the price of power.” Frank grinned maniacally. “Besides, I’m sure Diego knows a few places where it won’t show.”
    The huge man shot him a malevolent glance. He then examined the syringes carefully.
    “If you want it, Kim, I’ll do it. But I tell you, it may not be the best idea.”
    Frank interrupts:
    “But you’ll save yourself a lot of work.”
    “Boys, I feel that it’s best if I get to think about it. I’ll be right back.”
    She rushed to the bathroom. Wincing in pain, she sat down on the toilet seat. Once again, her body was completely cramped. She was vaguely aware of the fact that her afternoon training session would start in some fifteen minutes, and the thought filled her with dread. The whole situation reminded her of her breast enlargement surgery. Sure, now they looked good, but the first few weeks had been hellish. Silently, she weighed the choices she had. The injections would doubtlessly help her, and it all seemed pretty safe. However, the mere thought of some of the possible effects something like this could have made her stomach cramp.
    Finally, she decided to give it a shot. She laughed at her internal monologue and found that a one-week-trial would be best. If there was no significant change, she’d stop it.
    Diego accepted her decision silently, then proceeded to inject her with the first four syringes. She then resumed training. At first, the pain was mind-numbing, but oddly enough, she felt a burst of energy after an hour or so, just as she was slowly lifting some dumbbells to train her arms. She continued, feeling strangely invigorated. Soon, Diego realised that her movements had become easier and quicker. However, he decided to keep his thoughts for himself.
    Later, when he gave her a final massage to complete the day of training, he finally asked her:
    “Are you really sure that you are going in the right direction? You know, I get a lot of women, usually older than you, who train hard to keep their husbands, but normally, they fail. I’m not quite certain about your “plan”, since Luisa didn’t tell me everything, but it seems rather odd, doesn’t it?”
    She winced as he pulled a really sore muscle.
    “Diego, I can tell you that I’m not so sure myself. I hope that this works, otherwise I’m in trouble. Believe me, I don’t have much of a choice.”
    “What’s up? Can I help?”
    “It’s about money. I owe the bank quite a sum, so I hope I’ll be able to pay soon. Besides, I spent my time with Walter to get my money, so I just have to get this done. And guess what? I’m enjoying this training. It seems easier now.”
    Diego continued the massage, but remained silent.
    “I think this stuff works.”

    Meanwhile:
    The jeep roared through the undergrowth, tossing the passengers around. The heat was murderous, sweat was glistening on skin. Finally, the rag-tag building complex was emerging from the jungle.

    Seven days later

    “Hi Kim, over here!”
    The friendly voice of a smiling redhead sounded over the café. Kim took a second to find Nina in the crowd. The blonde sat down. Nina called for the waiter, than gave her guest a good look.
    “You’ve been working out, haven’t you?”
    Kim looked around conspiringly, then quickly flexed her right arm. A noticeable bulge appeared.
    “Yes. What do you think of it?”
    The waiter quickly jotted down their drinks, then disappeared back into the building. They were al fresco and enjoyed the growing warmth of late spring.
    “I like it. What are you up to?”
    “I shouldn’t be telling you, but…” She quickly explained the whole thing.
    “So you’re going to be a bodybuilder. That’s odd. Any idea how big you’ll have to be to get him?”
    “I’m not quite sure. I talked about it with Diego, and he said if my progress continued this way, I could be any size I want by the time Jacob comes back. Actually, I think that, since I only get one attempt to get him, the bigger the better. It seems odd, but I think I could get used to the strength. Yesterday, I carried my food home, and normally, I’m quite spent after that. But then, I only felt ready for more.”
    “Wow. Can I squeeze it? I just want to touch your arm. Please?”
    “Go ahead.”
    Kim flexed again, the bulge in her arm was easily visible.
    “Cool. I must say, I’m quite curious about your future look. By the way, did you hear that Colleen is coming back? You know, the girl who went overseas to become a fashion designer. I’m quite interested in what she looks like now.”
    Nina smiled mischievously. They had both been on the heavier side of the class and had spent a lot of time making each other’s life miserable. She had kept her weight, but had improved her style. Her choice of profession as a tailor had been a way of maintaining the air of competition in Nina’s life.
    “I don’t know, I haven’t seen her since, and apparently, her designs were not quite as fashionable as she would have liked.”
    Kim had been Nina’s “protector” in school and had introduced her to the in-crowd. She had followed their competition with a certain interest, but had never understood the actual problem.
    “Anyway, tell me more about this Diego guy. He seems gorgeous!”
    “Nina, he’s gay.”
    “I want to see him, I don’t want to fuck him. Get me a photograph!”

    in reply to: First attempt at a story #16649
    El_Roy_1999
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    I'll just post more today, I'm getting ahead quite well.

    Timetables

    The next day, Kim slept late. At 1pm, her phone rang.
    “Kim, it’s Luisa. I have wonderful news. Won’t you come and meet me at my place?”
    Kim got up slowly. She had had a drink too many yesterday and her memory was still a little fuzzy on the details. Apparently, Luisa had some friends from the university who were working on some oddball science projects that would be helpful. After this piece of information, Kim had seen her life flash in front of her eyes. She’d thrust a woman who was just as crazy as the rest of her clan with her future. And she’d become a muscle-freak. First, she would need a shower.
    An hour and a half later, she arrived at Luisa’s loft. It was a beautifully renovated 19th century factory, adapted for modern living and housing the daughter’s private office and surgery. She rang. There was laughter inside. Luisa opened the door. She wore a tank-top and some fancy training trousers. Smiling, she bade her in.
    “Have a seat.” She showed her a white leather couch ensemble upon which four people were sitting, enjoying their drinks. She introduced them quickly:
    “This is Diego, he’s a bodybuilding coach and nutritionist. You could have guessed, I think. He even won some kind of trophy.” The huge black-haired man smiled. He seemed to literally burst out of his clothes.
    “These two are Frank and Taehan. They’re the guys from college I told you about.” Two young men, one of them Asian in appearance, grinned at her, apparently aroused by her mere existence.
    “And that’s Helena, my anaesthetist. She’ll help me with your surgeries.” The mousy, brown-haired woman smiled faintly.
    “Surgeries?”
    Luisa grinned broadly:
    “Of course. If you want to seduce my brother, you’ll have to look your best. And, wow, does that sound sick! Anyway, what we’re going to do is set up a tight training regime, and our two friends here,” she indicated the two scientists, “will whip up some concoction to help you do all this in two months and a half. I’ll cover the expenses, and we’ll both get half of my daddy’s money.”
    With that, she took another line of cocaine and gave Kim a maniac grin.
    “What are you waiting for? Get going.”
    Frank and Taehan got up, one of them had a sterile needle and drew some blood.
    “We’ll need this to organise your treatment. We’ll be able to reduce side-effects to a minimum. Could you please stand up, so we can get our figures?”
    Kim did as she was told. Finally, Diego got up and asked her if she could start right away. As she nodded, he led her to his car and they were off to his private gym.

    Hard work

    “And three more, two more, one more. Okay, you’re done for today.” Kim sat up from the bench. Diego smiled at her, waiting for her to catch her breath.
    “That was very good. You seem to have quite a lot of stamina for exercising. That will definitely help build quickly. Now, the best will be to take a shower, and then, I’ll give you a massage to ease the tension.”
    Oddly enough, this didn’t sound strange to Kim. Diego was a huge man, with enormous muscles and an apparently larger than life penis which clearly showed through his tight pants. He was also gay, and had a rather marvellous collection of pictures of naked men in his studio.
    After the shower, Kim enjoyed the massage, then went home. Regardless of the warm bath that she actually took afterwards, she still woke up the next day feeling horrible. Every single muscle in her body hurt and felt as if it were burning brightly. She got up, made herself some coffee and turned on the TV. The news anchor just tried to explain the recent terrorist threats. Jacob was definitely out of luck. Once again, his flight had been delayed. After a short glimpse of one of the supposed heads of the organisation, the host turned to his female associate and they smilingly showed the “Animal of the Day”. Actually a cute spitz dog.
    Kim tried to stretch. Just as every single part of her body went “click” and crunched along, the phone rang. She picked it up and quickly found out that Diego was going to pick her up in twenty minutes. She readied herself for training and packed her things.
    Half an hour later, she was once again pumping iron. Diego smiled relentlessly as he pushed her for more repetitions. During their lunch, the doorbell rang. Frank had arrived, carrying a suitcase. He sat down while Kim swallowed her concentrated energy food greedily.
    “Hi there. We’re done and guess what, you’ll thank us!” He opened the suitcase, displaying long rows of pre-filled syringes. They contained a reddish liquid. “This stuff will help you build. It’s specially prepared for your body and allows you to increase your muscle mass. This one,” he indicated the next container “reduces muscle deterioration. And that increases your regeneration. The fourth one prevents masculinisation. You get to keep your beautiful looks, your soft skin, your sweet face and your lovely voice and…” He trailed off.
    Diego looked sceptically at the syringe array:
    “I’m not sure you should use this kind of chemical warfare, you know. I never heard of it, and it doesn’t look very safe.”
    The scientist snapped out of his trance:
    “It’s perfectly safe. We developed it for the military, and it works! At least in animal testing, but you should have seen the chimp we built.”
    Kim and Diego exchanged some worried looks. She asked:
    “So there was no testing on humans?”
    “Of course not! You want cutting edge, you get it. But you know what, we’re going to monitor you as close as possible and if anything is odd, we quit immediately. I tell you, you’ll be perfectly safe, and as far as I can guess, you’ll be able to increase your muscle mass by half in three weeks, given that you train and eat enough.”
    Diego stared at him:
    “In three weeks? That’s biologically impossible.”
    “Well, scientifically it is. Do you want to see a picture of the chimp?”
    “Err… Okay.”
    Frank reached into his jacket’s pocket and pulled out a planner. He flipped through a few pages, than showed them a photo. They stared at it.
    “That’s a gorilla, isn’t it?”
    “It must be.”
    “It’s not. Convinced?”

    The first results will be "visible" tomorrow. Sorry to keep you waiting.

    in reply to: First attempt at a story #16647
    El_Roy_1999
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    Next part: Thanks for the kind comments.

    A simple plan

    As the sun went down, the two women were still sitting on the big brown sofa in the Machacari Club. Kim was already quite drunk, Luisa was still angry and very sober.
    “You know what, I hated every single minute of it.” The widow slumped forward a little. “You can't possibly imagine the sacrifice I had to make. To be close to this fleshless, living corpse. And the smell… I mean, did your daddy ever wash himself? I tried to check, but I couldn't find out!”
    “You already told me. And yes, I’m also quite happy that he has passed on. But, as you are surely aware, all your efforts have been in vain.”
    “That's right. How could he have done this to me? I gave him three of my best years. That’s more than most people would give, even without the prospect of money. I need to get a hold on my share.”
    The daughter smiled, wiping her ebon hair from her brow. That’s where she wanted to get to all afternoon.
    “We'll have to check up on Jacob. And yet, I doubt that he will give us our parts. He wouldn't act against father's wishes. Besides, he's stupid, but he's not dumb. I guess we have to make him give us the money. You know what? You could try the same thing that you did on my old man.”
    Kim stared at her, both drunk and dazed.
    “You mean I should seduce him? I thought you hated me. I thought you hated what I did to your father.”
    Luisa gave her a grim look.
    “Well, he's dead, and I think my sympathies have been buried alongside with him. Besides, his will is just about the biggest insult I've ever heard. I think we should do that.”
    “Any idea what he likes? With your father it was easy. He liked tall blondes with big breasts and guess what, I just fit the bill perfectly.”
    “I noticed. We'll just have to check on his stuff. As most men, he'll have his collection of porn on his PC, so we'll find out pretty fast. As I know him, he wouldn't have a password on his system. He's actually of the gullible kind. And you know, he probably has simple tastes, just like his daddy.”

    Meanwhile:
    “There seems to have been a problem in acquiring the assets you promised”, the voice stated in a matter of fact way. “Please attend to the headquarters immediately.” The caller hung up.

    When the going gets weird…

    “He likes that? I can't believe it. Your family is even more messed up than I thought!”
    Kim stared at the laptops screen in open disgust. They were in Jacob's old room at the family mansion. He had moved in there for the time after the funeral, but seemed to be prepared to leave soon. He had business somewhere in the Third World, some kind of investment project. The laptop computer's screen was showing series after series of bodybuilder pictures. Female ones.
    “At least, he doesn't seem to be gay, huh?” Luisa was smiling triumphantly at her stepmother. “You won't need to have a sex-change surgery.”
    Kim still hadn't moved. Slowly, her drunk decision from yesterday was flooding in on her. Once again, she'd do it for the money. It's not as if she wouldn't need it. Her creditors were still closing in on her, occasionally asking about their cash. She guessed that she'd get a few weeks of respite on account of being a widow, but she could see herself back at the little house her parents lived in all their lives. She swallowed.
    “Okay. I guess I'll do it. There's just one question: how can I possibly get it done. I've met one of these women at the gym where I work out, and it must have taken her years to get this kind of shape. Besides, he seems to like big breasts too.”
    Just as Luisa wanted to answer, they both heard the shutting of the door downstairs. With a quick movement, they shut down the computer and left the room. Jacob was just coming up the stairs. They both fell into a casual stance.
    “Hi Jacob. How do you feel?”
    He looked at the women with a certain disdain.
    “Not too well. Besides, I have my packing to do. Something has come up, so I'm leaving tonight. I'll be back in two months and a half. Maybe we can have a talk about the whole situation when I come back.”
    Luisa smiled at Kim.
    “I think we can.”
    He gave them an odd look, than went into his room.

    in reply to: Greecian Formula… #13898
    El_Roy_1999
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    Wow! I just learned something. Thanks a lot. Cool.

    I guess I'll check before nitpicking next time.

    BTW: It's still turkish, not turkian. (GWB)

    in reply to: Greecian Formula… #13895
    El_Roy_1999
    Participant

    I like the picture a lot. It has great dynamism and coloring.

    Anyway, it's "greek". Sorry for the nitpick, but since the US president made that blunder, I've learned this little detail of English grammar.

    in reply to: Goth Muscles :D #13588
    El_Roy_1999
    Participant

    Cool!

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