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Well DCM, I'm glad that you liked that little excerpt. In fact, I have a couple of others that I think are relevant.

* "Most people who have low self-esteem have earned it."  –  Derek in a nutshell.

* Here's one for weddings.  –  "I notice at Jewish weddings they break a glass. You ever been to an Irish wedding? Glasses, bottles, mirrors, tables, chairs, arms, legs, the band instruments, and the groom's neck. We don't fuck around. Mazel tov!"

There were others that I thought were funny, but the have no relevance at this point. I'm sure that if some people began to rattle off random things, I can fid something that matches up.  😉

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Truth be told, I think that the first one was better. This one's still great, but the shades used in the first one better accenuate her muscles. It gives it a more difined look, despite her heavy appearance. Again, it's a great picture, it just needs a tiny bit more work. Ironically, the shading that you gave the second one makes it look like she has some fat on her muscles. It just looks more rounded. Sorry if this doesn't do wonders for your self-esteem, but I'm just being honest. I figure that it's better to hurt and help, than to sooth and hinder.

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Clever development. Too bad we didn't get to see some more growth.

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You almost make that sound like a bad thing.  😉

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Nice addition! Will we get to see some feats of strength next?

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Very well written! Are we going to get to see Diana's transformation as well, or is it going to be one of those "You get to guess how it goes" things?

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A random online girl? How the hell is anyone supposed to get that?

Seriously though, great job. Now do the other characters that grow.

Well… except for the monkey. 😉

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Actually, looking at this reminded me of one of George Carlin's little rants. If anyone is interested, this little gem came from one of George Carlin's books, "Napalm and Silly Putty". Please excuse the cussing, but it IS George Carlin.

"I don't like porno movies. They piss me off. First they show a great-looking naked woman who starts playing with herself. And while I'm watching, she sort of becomes my girlfriend. And then, suddenly, in walks a guy with a big dick, and he starts fucking my girlfriend. It pisses me off."

I know that it is a little off topic, but I think that it is kind of funny, considering the talking about Derek not deserving her. Only, in this, he is the big dick.  😉 Well, that and the fact that she grew out of her clothes, becoming even more gorgeous.  😀

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He may not deserve her, but he does deserve that kind of mental anguish. I would personally love it if he was put into that situation and finds, to his horror, that he likes being with a woman that is vastly stronger than he could ever be. Even though he secretly likes it, he has act like nothing is different and that muscles on a woman are bad. And then because he constantly acts like a dick to Tetsuko (and probably will get caught having an affair), we get the decaying marriage, and he gets to wonder every night, as he tries to go to sleep,  if she's finally had it with him and/or knows about what it is that he is doing. 👿

See, this is the kind of thing that happens when you are typing online, bipolar, and forget to take your meds.  😉

If either of the above statements made you feel uncomfortable, I'll let the voices in my head tell you what they think about it.  😉

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At the cost of sounding ignorant, can we at least know what kind of comic you're looking for? Super strength? FMG? GTS? A combination of all three? Come on! We need some kind of direction to go!  😉

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