[Michael Pouliot]

Partly because he's a hard working guy but also because the comic weighs in at a record breaking (for a FMG Comic) 72 (SEVENTY TWO) pages (with an option to continue for a bit more after that if FFF ain't dead by then)!!!!

That is amazingly generous, especially considering how fantastic the quality of the work is so far.  DA needs a tip jar.

[Michael Pouliot]

Jack,

Out of curiosity, how long did it take you to create that?

[Michael Pouliot]

People shouldn't be messin' up the mind of DCM…

[Michael Pouliot]

FROM                      THE AMAZONS ARENA BBS    702-243-7723

The Female Juggernaut!

    Lucy Wagner looked out the window of the police station.
The past week had seen the most bizarre set of circumstances
in the history of the small town she lived in. The superhero
team "The X-Men", had been in town trying to stop the ramp-
age of the villian known as the Juggernaut. After much damage
to the town and quite a few casualties, they had finally man-
aged to stop his murderous rampage. In fact, they were able
to take away his powers completely by having the woman named
Rogue absorb his powers. After they wore off of her, the po-
wers evidentily returned to their source, something they
referred to as the Ruby of Cytorrak.
    With a normal Marco Cain in police custody, Storm had
stayed behind in order to watch for the return of the Ruby.
The X-Men were worried that it would return to the Earth's
atmosphere, that it might have a symbiotic relationship with
Cain. However, with a week of no sign of the ruby, Storm was
set to leave. Within the hour Marco Cain was being sent to a
special federal holding pen and would no longer be the con-
cern of the small town. As a police-dispatcher in a small
town, this was the most excitement Lucy was likely to see in
her lifetime.
    At least, she thought it would be.

    As she looked out the window, she saw the van pull into
the station. It was here for Marco. A whole squad of special
team forces paraded into the police station. Even though
Marco had turned into a normal human, they would not take any
chances with him. As they led him out to the van, Lucy saw
that he was really not that big at all. When she saw him last
week, when he was the Juggernaut, he was 10 feet tall with
muscles all over the place. He was still a lot bigger than
she was, so she was glad for all of the extra security. If
something got out of hand, physical restraint was not one of
her strong suits. She wondered what it must have been like
for him when he was so big, and so powerful. And now, he had
been reduced to a mere mortal.
    They loaded him into the van, and the squadron leader
signaled to Storm. She would fly overhead to watch over the
drive to the federal pen. As they pulled away Lucy sighed a
breath of relief, the whole ordeal was over. Life would
return to normal as the town would pick up the pieces from
the Juggernauts' wake of destruction.

    7:00 P.M.  rolled around, finally it was time to go
home. Lucy got her belongings together and headed out the
door.

    "Hey Lucy, make sure you head right over to the gym,"
Pete cried out to her. He always gave her a hard time.

    "Only if you'll meet me there," she joked back to him.

    Ever since she joined the force, she had put on a little
extra weight. At 5'5", she weighed about 145 pounds. Not too
bad, but it was a soft 145. Since she sat at a desk all day,
she had to start to exercise. Unfortunately it was not as
easy to take off as it was to put on.
    She thought about her plans for the upcoming weekend.
Her sister and herself were going to do Christmas shopping in
Manhatten. This year Christmas wouldn't be the same without
her boyfriend Jimmy in her life. Ever since he gained strange
water powers and dubbed himself "Hydro-Man" and left her for
a life of being a superhero, Lucy had been in a funk. Perhaps
this is why I've let myself go, she thought.
    As she neared her driveway she saw a strange red glow at
the base of her house. At first, she thought that her house
was on fire. But upon closer rewiew she saw that it was not
spreading. As she got out of her car she ran towards the
source. It was a ruby of some sort. It was THE ruby! A
million thoughts ran through her head, it might be dangerous,
or maybe even radioactive.
    It glowed so brightly, her entire body was aglow in its
rays. She knelt down to get a closer look, and was careful
not to touch it. The ruby was beautiful in shape and design,
it drew her nearer and nearer. Finally, she decided to pick
it up. What was the worst that could happen, she thought?
    As she lifted it up a red glow washed over her body
that began at her hand and slowly spread throughout her
entire body. It was at this time she felt her clothing feel
too tight and a powerful energy surged through her. She heard
her belt being stretched out and realized that she was grow-
ing!  Her entire body was slowly being transformed by the
magical ruby. She gasped as she looked down and saw the size
of her arms. Her once small and weak arms were being filled
up with inches and inches of muscle. Her sleeves were
stretched out completely, wrapped around her now massive
arms.  She squeezed her biceps and ripped apart her over-
stretched sleeves. The rest of her police uniform stretched
tight around her growing breasts.  Finally, with one deep
breath her uniform burst apart instantaneously.
    The front of her shoes ripped apart as her toes tore
through the front of them. Her thighs, once soft and flabby,
had stretched her slacks out to ridiculous porportions as her
monsterous thighs kept on growing and growing. Slow tears
formed around the seams, and slowly got larger and larger as
her legs continued to increase in size.  She squeezed her
thighs and this shredded the rest of her pants.  She looked
down at her exposed legs and could not believe the size of
her muscles.  She ran her hands down her thighs, as large as
her hands had grown, they still looked small compared to her
massive quads. They had grown rock-hard as well, in fact,
they probably could crush rocks between them. Her calves were
unreal as well, they looked bigger than her waist used to be!
She was being turned into a female Juggernaut!
    An incredible feeling of strength and power filled every
fiber or her being. It felt as if her strength was limitless.
She grew anxious to test her new power. First though, she let
her body continue to grow larger and larger. She had grown in
height as well as she noticed that she was actually able to
look down at the roof of her house. She must have grown to be
close to 10 feet tall, she thought, and wondered where she
would ever be able to find clothes that would fit her.
    Suddenly, she felt some type of armor form around her
immense body. As she looked down she saw a brown costume of
some type, and immediately thought about redesigning it, if
not getting rid of it completely. A helmet of some type
appeared around her head, and her brown curly hair flowed out
from underneath it. She stood there and flexed every muscle
on her incredible new body. It felt as if she could lift up
her entire house. It was time to test her new muscles.

    She walked over to the large pine tree in her backyard.
As she placed her hands around its trunk, she squeezed them
ever so slightly. Splinters and shards of bark fell onto her
hands. Her hands were even powerful, she thought. She looked
the tree over and a crazy thought came to her. She lyed down
on her back and wrapped her enormously thick llegs around the
trunk. Slowly she squeezed her legs together. Her muscles be-
came engorged with blood, and bulged even greater. The tree
cracked in half as she applied very little effort at all. She
got extremely excited as she ralized that her thighs had just
felled a 100 foot tall tree, and she barely used any of her
vast new power!
    She stood up and wiped off the pieces of tree, and
flexed her unreal legs. They were absolutely huge! If she
could crush a tree between her legs, what would happen if a
man was caught between them? She walked over to her neigh-
bor's  yard. He had a farm, and a lot of things that she
could test her strength out on. She went up to the barn, it
was locked, no problem. As she gripped the lock in her hands
she gently tugged on it, and it popped right open. Her head
reached the 10 foot high entranceway of the barn, so she knew
that she had indeed grown to 10 feet in height. She saw the
tractor and smiled, it would probably be too easy to lift,
but the what the hell. She gripped it with one hand and
lifted it up effortlessly. She began doing presses with it
and got bored once she had done 15 reps. Next, she took the
pitchfork and pressed it against her chest. The prongs bent
against her powerful pectorals like they were made of
aluminum foil. There seemingly was nothing that could either
test her strength or her invulnerability. As she walked back
to her house, she thought about how this would change her
life. Would she still be a cop, or would she be a superhero?
    She grew anxious to share her amazing change with some-
one, and decided the first person would be Pete. Having grown
so large, she was unable to fit inside of her house without
doing damage to her doorway. So she reached in and grabbed
her portable phone from its holder. As she dialed his
phonenumber she wondered how he would react.
    "Hello?" he answered his phone.
    "Uh….hi Pete. It's me Lucy," her voice sounded extreme
ly nervous.

    "Lucy, are you alright? You sound strange," he asked
her, as he got a little worried that something might be
wrong.

    She stammered a little bit, "N-nothing's wrong, don't
worry. I was just wondering if you could stop over to my
place. I have something incredible to show you."

    He became intrigued, this was very unlike Lucy. They
always flirted a work, but she had never taken him up on his
advances before. Now out of the blue, she calls at 9:00 at
night.
    "Sure, I'll be right over. But what is it that you have
to show me?"

    "I'm not telling you, it would ruin the surprise. Don't
worry though, you'll see for your own eyes soon enough.

    Her stomach was in knots, she didn't know how he would
react to the new Lucy. She knew that he liked girls that ex-
ercised, but she sort of took that look to an extreme now.
As she looked herself over, she really didn't like her
costume at all. She took off her helmet and shook out her
long, curly brown hair. Even her hair had grown as it now
came down to her mid-back. She took off the rest of her cos-
tume, and only left on her undergarments and boots. The
lights from her house glowed across her body, highlighting
every curve of her musculature.
    A car's headlights lit up her yard as Pete pulled into
her driveway. She bent down and picked up the ruby, and put
it inside of her window. She heard Pete get out of his car.
    "Pete, I'm over here, in the back yard," she crouched
down so her head wouldn't be seen over the roof.
    As Pete rounded the corner Lucy jumped out in front of
him to surprise him.
    "Surprise!" she extended her arms out to him.

    Pete jumped back, scared as hell by her jumping in front
of him. As he got his first look at her, his jaw slowly
dropped open.
    "W-what the hell…..your huge. HUGE!!!" He staggered
backwards.

    She flexed one of her massive arms, "I know, do you like
it?"

    He struggled to get his words out. Little Lucy had grown
from a tiny little woman into the largest human being he had
ever seen.
    "I don't know, I mean how did this happen? You left work
and you were normal, and now, your the biggest fucking
mountain of muscle I've ever seen."

    She squeezed her enormous breasts together, "I know I am
But you still haven't answered my question, Do you like it?"

    He gulped hard, "I'd have to feel them before I pass
judgement."

    She laughed, this was more like the Pete she knew.
"Go ahead, I'll get a ladder if you need one."

    He walked over to her, his head barely coming up to her
belly button.
    "Jesus, you're so fucking big! You haven't answered my
question, how did this happen?"

    "Well, remember why Storm had stayed behind for a week?"

    He looked up at her, "You don't mean to tell me you
found the ruby?"

    She smiled as she looked down at him, "Yup, and I guess
you can say that I'm the new Juggernaut."
    She squeezed him up against her body.

    "Yeah, I guess you can say that."

    He felt her iron-hard thighs, his hands looked so tiny
as he ran them across her legs. They were so hard and so big
he couldn't believe it.

    "You wouldn't believe some of the things that I can do
with the body that your enjoying so much right now."

    He kissed her thighs, savoring each one, "I'll bet. Do
you realize that your stronger than the Thing? Stronger than
Thor? For christ's sake, you're even stronger than the fuck-
ing Hulk!"

    She thought about it for a second and smiled, "So what
you're saying, is that I'm the most powerful person on the
planet?"

    He laughed as her thought about it, little Lucy Wagner,
was now the strongest, most powerful person alive.
    "Yeah, I guess you are. So what does that mean, what are
you going to do now?"

    "I don't know, I haven't given it much thought. I think
that I'll contact the X-men, and see what they can do for me.
I need to find out about the extent of my powers, I mean, if
I'm not careful I could really hurt somebody. You should see
what I did to a tree with my legs alone!"

    He looked over at the fallen tree in her yard and
thought about her crunching it apart between her legs. Wow!
    "Normally, I'd say that I'd love to get between your
legs, but I don't know if that would be such a good idea."

    She really wanted to have sex with him, she was feeling
so good, so powerful. But she also didn't want to accidentily
squeeze off his penis.
    "Maybe one day, when I learn how to control my new
power."

    "So what do you want to do?" he asked as he looked up at
her oversized tits.

    She knelt down beside him, and still she couldn't look
him in the eye, "I'd really like it if you spent the night."

    He got excited, "I thought you didn't want to…"

    "I don't mean that, just sleep with me. You can sleep on
top of me. I have two large breats that I'm sure will provide
you with a comfy pillow. And then tomorrow we can figure out
what the hell I'm going to do with my life."

    He like the sound of that, "Sure, sounds good to me.
Just make sure you don't roll over in the middle of the night
or you'll crush me!"

To be continued

FROM                      THE AMAZONS ARENA BBS    702-243-7723

[Michael Pouliot]

Ah, the classic problem of the FMG writer…able to write a scene but unable to come up with a story.  I'm no expert writer, but what you're going to need to decide first is…do you really want to write a story?  It's a lot of work.  You'll need a basic plot, structured around a setup, a series of events leading to a climax, and a final resolution.  What you have here is a setup (really a teaser).  If you really want to flesh this out into a full story, it'll take a commitment.

OK, enough blathering…here's a basic outline…

Woman casts spell
Woman uses new power to get laid
Woman tries to save new boyfriend from car crash, fails…not strong enough
Woman casts new spell…becomes enormous…and possessed (it is the Necronomicon)
Woman proceeds along path of destruction
Different woman finds book, casts spell to stop possession and return huge woman to normal
Different woman can't resist temptation…casts spell…story ends

Of course, there's 8 zillion other ways this can go.  But if you really want to give it a shot, I'd suggest first drafting up a simple outline and then going for it.

[Michael Pouliot]

And for f*ck's sake, please cut down on the smiley faces.

[Michael Pouliot]

I’m surprised that my all time favorite didn’t make this list:

http://www.thevalkyrie.com/stories/growth.htm.

[Michael Pouliot]

I could’ve sworn I saw this story first posted a few years back. Beyond the sillyness of a 60′ bicep on a person who has experienced no significant height change, I find all stories where the central characters are under the age of consent to be distasteful. This particular story is as disturbing as it gets, considering the central character is six years old. "[H]is little 6 year old sister" and "[h]er nipples swelled bigger" should never appear in the same story together.

It surprises me that I see very little negative commentary in the GTS environment about the usage of underage characters. Of course, there’s no reason why I should expect the GTS community to uphold my own standards, particularly when I suspect that a majority of the general population would find this genre disturbing (or at least rather odd). To each his own…

[Michael Pouliot]

Ristard, you posted Part II on DtV a while back…

http://www.thevalkyrie.com/stories/1misc15/healing.txt

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