[Max]

Glad to know that you are enjoying this story my friends and thanks for your comments. I wasn't sure how members will react at the shocking end of this part.

To say the true, this scene is not the real reason why this story have the name of Despair, but I promise you that it will be clear very soon.

About why the girl hasn't attack at her own father, well… that is part of another shocking surprise.

Next Sunday part 3 will be posted and these questions will be answered for sure.

Max

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😥

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It seems that this story line was abandoned  😥

Is there no hope?

Max

[Max]

Despair
By Max

Part 2

"I'm not 100% sure of it, but today I saw this young girl bullying
a couple of football players. She laughed as they hit her hard, but
she show no sign of pain. Then, she hit them and they fell to the
ground sobbing. When I saw that, my first impulse was to stop
her" said Chris.

"Please, tell me you didn't do it" said Alyssa worried.

"No mom. I didn't do it because of you. If this girl was indeed
enhanced, she could have discovered that I'm 5 times stronger
than any boy" sighed Chris.

"Yes, Since my strength is not a power, it's in my genetic codes
imprinted. You and your sister have gained great strength due
that fact. If you show your great strength off, that will be very
strange. People expect that women develop powers, but a boy
that is so strong will be very suspicious" said Alyssa.

"Yes mom. I will never do something to hurt you" said the 7
years old boy as she hugged at her mother. "So instead of
stopping the girl, I yelled for help. The girl immediately ran
away" said Chris.

"Very good thinking Chris. I'm proud of you" said Alyssa
carrying at her son in her arms.

"Mom" he said.

"Yes" smiled tenderly Alyssa.

"I'm not a baby, you know?" said Chris raising an eyebrow.

"I know" said Alyssa hugging at her son. She gave him a kiss in
his head and put him down on the floor. "But you will be always
my son. Besides, can you imagine how many women will like to
carry in their arms at their children even they are adults. That's
something I can do. You will never be so heavy for me to carry"
smiled Alyssa.

Chris shuddered at the idea. "Mom, focus in our discussion. Do
you think that the girl from the school is enhanced? I think she is,
otherwise how a 15 years old girl managed to beat at 4 strong 16
years old boys?"

"Maybe she is super strong. I will need to check it out" said
Alyssa as she vanished in the thin air. Chris shook his head and
went to his room.

Moments later, she appeared in the kitchen fully dressed in her
heroin costume. "Chris told me that there is a possible enhanced
girl giving problems in his school. I will need to find out" Alyssa
said.

"I go with you" said Sam standing up.

"No Sam. I don't know if we are dealing with an enhanced girl
or not. As soon as I know if the girl represents a danger, I will
call you and together we will take her out for good" said Alyssa.

"Good luck baby" said Leon kissing at his wife. "And be careful.
Remember that if she is an enhanced girl, she has more than one
power"

"I will be very careful" said Alyssa. Then carrying at Katie in her
arms, she told her. "Now, be a good girl and take care of daddy
in my absence".

"Yes mommy" cheered the child.

"Well, I will be back soon" said Alyssa as she vanished again.

In Chris school's there was only a person using the gym. "Oh
yes. Those assholes were useful after all" grinned a girl as he was
lifting a very heavy dumbbell.

"I knew I will find you here" said Alyssa as she materialized in
the gym.

"Absolute Drainer!!" gasped the girl. "Why are you here?"

"To talk to you. I 'm looking for a girl that was giving a hard
time to some boys in the morning. I presume that you are that
girl" said Alyssa.

"You presume well" smirked the girl. "And what if I'm the girl
you are looking for".

"I will talk to you to know the reasons of your actions" explained
Alyssa.

"All men threat at women as garbage. Well, it's time to give
them the same treatment" said the girl.

"You can't do that. That is wrong" said Alyssa.

"Don't tell me what is wrong or not. From now on, I will do
what I please. I won't ever be under the shadow of a man
again!!" yelled angered the girl as she launched the dumbbell
against Alyssa.

Alyssa was surprised by the strength the girl has. It was required
at least the strength of 5 men to launch the heavy dumbbell with
such force.

Using only a hand, Alyssa caught the projectile. "Don't
underestimate me little girl. There is no way you can hurt me"
said Alyssa as she compressed the dumbbell. The resistant metal
cried in protest as Alyssa's delicate hands applied an inhuman
pressure over it until made it a solid metal ball.

She dropped the ball and it clunked into the ground making a
deep hole. "Now, let's talk and…" was saying Alyssa before the
girl launched herself against her.

"You don't get it, right?. I don't want to hear your sermons" said
the girl as she hit at Alyssa hard.

Alyssa's denser skin wasn't even dent by the strong punch of the
girl. "I told you, you can't…" was saying again Alyssa as the girl
hit her again. This time, she managed to let at Alyssa felt the hit.

"What the…?" gasped Alyssa as was stepped back due the force
of the blow. "You can't be that strong" said Alyssa.

"Sure, I'm. Normally, I don't use all my strength. But since I'm
dealing with you, it will be fun not to restrict it" grinned the girl.

"OK, smart girl. Show me what you have" dared Alyssa.

The girl didn't hesitate and gave a series of powerful punches
against Absolute Drainer. Even Alyssa managed to avoid all the
attacks of the girl, the blows of air generated by the punches
were shots of compressed air that were devastating the walls of
the gym.

Alyssa didn't want to hurt her, but she needed to find a way to
stop at the girl before the entire gym collapsed over them. The
structure was getting very unstable very fast.

The girl stopped her attack to grab one of the gym's machines.
Her thin arms were capable of ripping off the heavy machine
from the floor and with it over her head, she ran toward Alyssa.

"That's enough!!" yelled Alyssa as she fired a plasma ball that
disintegrated the machine.

Realizing her defeat, the girl only fell to the ground. "Why are
you against me?. Women should support each other and show
men their right place" said the girl.

"Why would we do that? Men and women should be equals
individuals" tried to explain Alyssa.

"We are not equals anymore. Nature choose us to be the
strongest sex. Otherwise, why women are the only ones with
powers?" said the girl.

"Nobody knows why women are the only ones that are
developing these kind of powers" said Alyssa.

"I do. It's justice!! Women have being slave of the men for too
long. They are beasts. They treat us like pieces of meat they can
use to satisfy their primal instincts. They don't care about our
feelings or… if we are too young" sobbed the girl.

"Oh my…" gasped Alyssa as she feared about the girl's past.
"Please tell me, why do you feel that way toward men?" asked
Alyssa softly as her mother instincts took over.

"Because they are all the same. They don't care about you.
They… they…". The girl looked to floor and cried.

Alyssa walked to her side and hugged her. "Don't cry sweetie,
please tell me what is bothering you. Has a man abuse of you?"
asked Alyssa worried about the answer.

The girl nodded her head. "I was very young. Before I develop
my power. I was sexually abused day after day. Now that my
power appeared, I don't have that problem anymore, but still my
mother is suffering that horrible fate. I wish I could save her from
it, but what can I do…" sobbed the girl. "… I can't hit at my own
father".

To be continued…

[Max]

Great start. I like this kind of progression stories. I bet that Dina will have a great time comparing herself to Nicole and slowly overpass her. That way she can get the attention of her boyfriend back and humilliated at Nicole.

I will be looking forward for the next part.

Max

[Max]

Thanks for all the nice words my friends. I'm glad that you are enjoying this new adventure with Alyssa.

I must say that this adventure has the more intrigued plot I have ever designed, since it was made by taking in consideration the suggestions the members of this board sent to me.

The next part will be posted tomorrow and I must say that it will be… shocking.

Max

[Max]

Interesting beginning. I will be looking forward for more of this story.

Good luck

Max

[Max]

You really like to tease. Don't you?  😉

Max

[Max]

I wish you luck with the writer's block. Btw, part 6 is actually part 5. So, the part you will be working soon will be part 6.

Unless you are hidding a part  😉

Good luck

Max

[Max]

Great end Axel. I will be looking for that She-Hulk movie  😉

I must say I really like the strength feast Maria did in this final part. Specially the chopter one. It was extremelly hilarious.

It was also great to see that Tommy is doing well too.

Max

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