[Max]

Nice genie talk. So now Setlya is a younger genie. I wonder how old is Fertale 😉

It was great that Fertale understands Setlya feelings. I will be looking forward to see what will happen once Stan awakes.

Max

[Max]

This chapter was too short.  😥 Hope you can finish the fight scene soon. I will be looking forward for it.

Max

[Max]

I really like that Setyla used her muscles to open the door rather than her magic. Also, when Stan found the ring, I was expecting that it will be a magic object, but I never imagine how much magic it was. I burst of laughts when I Setyla mentioned the second genie and even I laught more when Stan mentions that he didn't want two slaves.

Great chapter. The story is turning out very good. Now with two muscled genies that want to please him, I must say that Stan is a very luck man  😆

Max

[Max]

Thanks a lot for the explanation and for this 'flashback'. It seems that we can expect a great catfight very soon.

Thanks also for the quick update. I enjoy it a lot.

Max

[Max]

Definetly it looks like the beginning of a great story. Hope she doens't forget to reveal her feeling toward him before the last wish.

Keep up the great work.

Max

[Max]

Oh! I would have love to see how Maria threw at those reports out of her house. That could have being a great image.  😉

Great new chapter Axel. I will be looking forward for the final piece of this great story.

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[Max]

Interesting twist. I wonder how her boyfriend died? There is a piece missing of her memories. She was in her boyfriend bedroom when she passed out. Then she runs in middle of the night when her transformation took place. What happened between those events? Also, how is Asling sure that a woman killed at her boyfriend?

Interesting power Asling has acquired. I will be looking forward for more of this story.

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[Max]

Wonderful story Fonk. I must say that I enjoyed it a lot. My only complain is that it wasn't longer.

I like that Vanessa didn't abuse of her boss as most women with 'that power' do in this kind of stories. Btw, very good job finding the way to phrase her wish in order to obtain 'that power'.

I really hope you can work in the future with Vanessa. She is a great character and it seems that the ring has more powers that it appear to have.

Thanks for sharing such wonderful story.

Max

[Max]

There is no problem. I will wait to see what you come up with.

Take care and good luck.

Max

[Max]

Great chapter. It brings a lot of light at the relationship the main characters are having. I can't wait to see what will happen. I really hope that Stan's touch affects Steyla's magic allowing her bend the rule that obligate her to be a slave, so she can please at her master.  😉

Max

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