[minimanmax]

I finnally got around to reading this and I must say i do like it. It's nice to see a big strong sister not adbusing her brother. I wonder what type of future they will have.

[minimanmax]

Thanks you guys I personally don't really go for the adbusives ones besides I think there are too meny of those stories out there. And I do find it hard to like the heroen (excuse my bed spelling please) if she's beating up and meanly putting down the main caracter. That is if I feel he really dose not diserve it. thanks for the links.

[minimanmax]

That's a really nice find. lol I can tell you although some ladies here might dissagree being nice don't seem to get you dates eather.*sigh* I do like how it ends though. Nice and sweet.

[minimanmax]

hey Max this is a message for the other Max (aka you can see my handle over there :P) I enjoyed you story. she didn't get too buff nice breast growth and I like minigts's any ways. I'm glad she did missuse the now found powers there are way too meny stories like that. Thanks for posting it.

[minimanmax]

I'm not sure how old you are but for most places 16 is too young. So I wouldn't say that your a moron. You could have told her to wait untill she is at least 18.

[minimanmax]

Thanks for the link I'll chack them out. But when I said mature I ment it in the way she acts. Like she knows where the line is. And dose not adbuse her man or men but thanks for the links.

[minimanmax]

I guess I'll put my two cents in. I feel that it is proper to put the name of the owners of the copyrights and the creaters of the caracters you are using in your fan fic. You know to give credit where it is do. It's just commonsences I guess.

thanks for letting me say that.

[minimanmax]

Please don't stop there. What happens to Joe next. I would love to know 😉

[minimanmax]

I have to agree with the rest of them it is a great story. I wonder how she'll handle boys I hope she is not mean to them.

[minimanmax]

Hey Jimmy;

I'm sorry I've been offline for a while. lol You should have told them that I created Sue in that Ms. Knewsomes form :P. You have the writing I started you can use some of that for your next one if you want. I'm sorry I can't seem to keep up with writing this stuff. I like the more mature (and my be maturnal type) strong women. The type that can crush you if they want to but won't. and I enjoy your child's play stories. keep it up even though I do not to be able too. Be sides it seems my writing sucks any ways.

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