[Mark Newman]

I’ve liked all of the ones I’ve seen in this series, many of which were posted on the DtV movie pages.

Good work. Do you make new ones? I’d like to see one where she drains the strength and muscle out of Superman and other male superheroes.

Mark

[Mark Newman]

Don’t expect anything soon. I’m on my 3rd Wednesday scene now and I have a lot of ideas left for the day. I’m enjoying it, and you will too.

Eventually.

😉

[Mark Newman]

I’d probably end up doing both. For example. It can start out loving and sweet and she might suggest making her stronger and stronger as part of a sex game. But things have a way of getting out of hand. Eventually she becomes superhuman and the lust for power takes over.

[Mark Newman]

Since I enjoy the reaction to growth as well as the action of growth, I like it to be spread out as much as possible, to give more time for varying responses both from the subject of the growth and from those around her.

But then, instant growth and the reaction to that is fun too.

So I end up using all kinds in my stories, from the slow increase in power to the sudden.

[Mark Newman]

Yes, it has a very good plot and I also like the way she managed the shift in the power to control his wishes, although I think he should have been a bit more suspicious of it. I certainly wouldn’t want to give up sole control so easily.

One alternative way to manage that would have been for him to wish her the power to stop anyone from harming either of them. Then that could have applied as well to any wish he would make to weaken her.

Wishes are so much fun. There are so many ways for them to go at least slightly wrong.

[Mark Newman]

Great work.

And it was all because, just to spite her, he had put her favorite little stuffed animal behind a bookcase that was too heavy for her to move.

[Mark Newman]

Eumi: Come on, Brother! Harder! Let’s see you really PUSH that muscle. There! Was that a little flicker of movement? A tiny little jump on your arm? A teensy weensy little bump there?

Brother: Groan! Y-e-e-s! You see! I —

Eumi: Whoops! Got that little bit too! Yummy. Good to the last drop. Drip!

[Mark Newman]

She’s thinking, "Not only are my muscles twice the size of these silly, puny men, but I’m also hard as steel. Heh-heh-heh"

Seriously, it was a sculpture of a goddess like this at the Brooklyn Museum that I saw when I was two that no doubt started me down the long road of amazon fetishes.

[Mark Newman]

I like them both. Psuedo science can end up being a lot like magic, and magic spells where kinks in the wording end up having unintended consequences can be a lot like science …. and for that matter a lot like poetry or law.

For me what makes it fun is how the changes fit into the situation and the characters’ lives and feelings. The change agent is more of a plot device for me, and not one to be abused.

[Mark Newman]

People check in to look at the story and also at additional comments that are made. So if there are many comments that will draw in people who have viewed it before. In other words, my guess is many of the views are the same people looking two or three times.

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