[Max]

This chapter was excellent Fonk. Not only the muscle growth was good, but also the way Vanessa act was very good and gentle. I like that kind of women.

I must say that you have pick up my curiosity with the last lines of the Ring. Which is this 'first test' that Vanessa had passed? I guess that I will have to wait to find out  😉

Keep up the good work.

Max

[Max]

Very interesting beginning. I will really like to see what will be the impression Ashling will make on her boyfriend.

Thanks for sharing your first story.

Max

[Max]

Thanks to all the people who participate in the poll and double thanks to the members that share their comments about the story.

Beginning from this Sunday, I will start to post the third adventure of Alyssa by parts (because the story is currently in progress). A new part will be uploaded weekly.

Hope you enjoy it.

Max

[Max]

I like the story so far. I guess that I know what Stan is passing throught. It's true that Setyla is everything he wants, but there is just a bit that is missing. She doesn't have an independence thought.

She does what her masters wants, and that is ok really, but sometimes a man want a companion and not a slave.

Since Setyla will do everything he wants, what about if he wish to have what he feels is missing? Just an idea.

This is a great story. I like strong amazon women who are gentle. Keep up the good work.

Max

[Max]

Interesting direction this story is taking. I laughed at how Maria managed to hide the evidence. Definetly it would have being quite a sight seeing a amazon muscled woman running with a tree in her arms.

Another great chapter Axel. Thanks a lot for it.

Max

[Max]

Glad you like the story. I will like to tell you that the third adventure of Alyssa is in process now. It's a bit slow than I thought, so I will ask a bit of patience.

Max

[Max]

Nice chapter. I can't wait to see what exactly Maria can do with her improved muscles. Thank you Axel for continuing the story.

Max

[Max]

Thanks my friends for your support. I'm so glad of the comments this story received that I have decided to make a third one. This one will take place a couple of years in the future.

To answer your question Axel, yes Alyssa can now extract the powers of the villaness she defeat, but only with the help of Samantha. I guess that what doesn't kill you, makes you stronger ah?

I have some of the plot for the next installment already drafted, I almost have defined at the villaness of the next story, but I still looking forward of any ideas that people will like to see.

Axel and Mark, if you have ideas for the next part, I will be more than glad to hear them.

Thanks again for your appreciation.

Max

[Max]

Thank you. I can't promise a next sequel, but if it would, it will have a lot more of strength feats. That will be for sure.

😀

Max

[Max]

Thanks a lot for your words dear readers. I'm glad that you have enjoy this next installment of Alyssa's life. I can't assure you that this will become a steady universe to work with, but if people like, I can explore more this universe.

As you have seen, in this universe only women have powers. So, if you have any ideas of what to see in a future story with this two heroins and what dangers they can confront, please feel free to PM me.

Max

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