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I'm bumping these stories because I have no FMG projects coming down the pipe in the immediate future, will also help any new folks to come by and check out these stories if they missed it.

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Heh I'm bumping these two stories because it looks like I've got nothing coming down the pipe in the immediate future, enjoy!

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Going to have to notify the mods about this thread, this has gotten unneccessarily rude and hurtful.  Even though I'm sure no one is agonizing over the comments yet, threads like this have no place in a shegrew forum where the focus is on average mild mannered women turning into sexy muscular amazon goddesses.

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Guys, come on now.  Both of you are arguing for no reason at all.

Strawberry, the more you try to explain yourself the more the point gets lost.  If writing is your forte, getting the point across is not.  Your post was fine at:

To recap:
–Sex ads = not work safe.
–Board created to see IF IF IF IF IF IF IF IF there was a problem as seen by OTHER MEMBERS. This was NEVER created for you or the other admin.

End of discussion, no need to explain why you were saying something or why you were doing whatever because that's when the point of whatever the heck you were writing gets lost.

Lingster, You're looking too deeply into what Strawberry is saying, the thread though ill worded for attention was meant to see how many people on the forum think that the sex ads were now going to become a big problem that would make the forum a non-work/school/library safe area.  Her only concern was that with the sex ads, she will not be able to browse the forums at work and also wanted to know if any of us would also have that problem as well.

Now both of you need to chillax and go do something constructive instead of bickering with each other.

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Debido-San just answered your question, anything about an already buff chick is pretty much F-M without the G, after all the point of FMG is to demonstrate the woman growing into a beautiful muscular female.

If she is already buff, then it would fall under the muscular females category as it will have nothing to do with the growth aspect whatsover.

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Well most here covered all the good points so I'm just going to bring up my own points:

1.) (most) People like stories that are short, sweet, and to the point.  Anything that reaches novel lengths instantly turns some people off, they want to see muscle growth ASAP! (Once again this is most but not all, those who like to read those stories are in the minority I have discovered.)

2.) People like all sorts of character qualities, whether the woman becomes a destroyer or a hero, whether she's gentle or savage, whether she's dangerous or huggable, you can pick any quality and you are guarenteed to have at least one person really like the story.  That being said I personally go for the heroine type of character who either has a conflict with her constantly changing body and tries hard to control it or totally embraces it and uses her abilities to save lives.  I'm not a big fan of a destroyer type unless the heroine accidentally finds herself going out of control.

3.) Personal pet peeve are stories that are updated over a monthly basis instead of "write" away, bwa ha ha ha man that was funny to me.  I personally do not like having to wait several months for a person to finish ONE story, I would much rather want it to be done immediately instead of having to waste my time waiting, and waiting, and waiting.

4.) I never read, if you manage to make me read a story then you've got something good, if not it's just like all the others in my honest opinion.  I'm not saying you should try to please what I'm looking for, but I am saying that if you manage to get me to read and hook me from the first sentence then you've got a damn good story going on there.

5.) Lot's of people are impatient, fast is good, slow is bad, long but complete is good, long but in progress bad.

6.) I'm guilty of not doing this but, proofread, you are guarenteed to find at least 10 mistakes even though you thought you wrote a flawless story.

7.) If you want to make something unique, you're going to have to make the transformation triggered by some kind of circumstance that has not yet been envisioned by other writers, this is near impossible to do so don't try to hard trying to find a unique twist that is only yours.

8.) An interesting character always makes a story worth reading, if the people fall in love with your character they will always want to read more about her adventures and find out what happens to her next.

9.) Conflict is fun, if there is no conflict it'll just be a big snooze fest.

10.) When it comes to Good and Bad etc.  People always want the villain to die, yet when asked if they want to turn the main "good" protaganist into the next evil villain, they are split in between 50/50.  Example: Hero A saves the world votes: 50 % Hero A turns into a villain after having defeated the evil in the world and now uses this power to destroy it votes: 50%

11.) Write what you would most be interested in writing about and not what the "fans" want.  Of course it has to be within FMG limits, meaning if you're suddenly writing about the fluffy clouds in the sky err… you're in the wrong place.

12.) Clothes ripping is an EXCELLENT display of muscle growth, there is no better substitute than when clothes rip off due to growing muscle mass.  If you're going for the "quick" FMG ripping clothes is the way to go.

13.) For muscles that grow over a long period of time, have other characters describe what's happening and then have the protagonist reflect on what's happening to her.  How people react and what she thinks about her changing body is a good substitute if you're not interested in tearing clothes.

14.) Nudity is not required to be considered FMG, the magic "bra straps" and "panties" can always stretch out to conform to the growing body albeit tearing a tiny bit.

15.) Sex is also not required in FMG, that's personally not my thing either I wouldn't want to read something like that.

There are mainly personal preferences and behaviors I have observed over the years, do what you want with this info and have fun writing your story.  Once you post it I'll do the mandatory read, and if your work is good from the get go then I'll read any new stories you've got and comment.  If not I'm going to be "honest" and tell you what needs improving and why I didn't like it speaking from a "FMG Mainstream" oxymoron perspective.

Good luck

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Whoa mama I think the pose came out great actually!  Cool pictures you've got going in your collection there for sure!

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And good luck with pleasing your girl with your physical appearance, but I'm sure she likes you for you so don't fret 🙂

I'm sure she does too, I'm just adding bonus points for the lady because I think she deserves it.  I'm also one of those type of guys who dislikes being a hypocrite, my thoughts have always been.  If I want my girlfriend or some such to be muscular, then by all means I better hold up to my end of the deal and also strive for a healthy body as well.  I mean it's not exactly fair (in my opinion) to let the other do all the work and not have anything to contribute on your end of the relationship.  So if my lady decided she wanted to be muscular, well then I will go to the gym with her and be muscular as well so we can BOTH be pleasing to the eyes.

As for the whole acting career stuff, thanks for the support.  Luckily I am already working in the TV business and have my mug on television in my local area as a news anchor.  I've also already completed a "mini" movie where I play the role of Hitman in a small independent project of my making that I really only need to show people who would be interested in hiring me.  Been rejected a few times back in high school, but now I'm one of the most recommended guys to work with so things are looking sharp so far.

As for the whole ovaries on the outside debacle, you lost me after the first uttering of the word dick.  But don't worry I do understand what you said in that the main purpose for you is to be honest whether people like it or not.  You don't do it for the sake of irritating people, you only do it because it's what you honestly feel and came to your head.  Simple really, I'm the same way except when I choose to "honestly" speak my mind I will word my sentences carefully so as to get the point across yet at the same time not be offensive, all this without sacrificing the honesty part.

Either way my opinion still stands, I don't think you've honestly offended anyone and if they do get offended it could have been one of those geniuses sending private IM's.  Not to mention you've already stated that you honestly don't mean to offend anybody so… I highly doubt you should be fretting over the "tone" of some posts, after all we've all got better things to do with our time.

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No way guy, you're not taking too long too do requests, really awesome work.  The only thing I request is that whatever future picture you do is that you add some clothes ripping action like you did with Misty turning into an Incredible She-Hulk.  Keep up the great work, and at the speed you're going it's perfectly fine my man.

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I haven't paid attention to the beginning of this thread so you know, I don't know what the heck you guys were talking about earlier so I'm just going to answer the question and move on with my life here.

I am skinny but not yet muscular, I get up around 7 in the morning to ride my bike in order to get some cardio into my work out.  I would like to start building some muscle definition preferrably the abdomen and the biceps because "my girl" who I talk to says she likes a guy with a nice abdomen and a great butt.

Okay no pressure!

Also since I'm going to be persuing a movie career I think it'd be better to do the "Bond" type roles if I had some muscle definition rather than chubbiness or love handle which I luckily do not have yet.  Though I would like to be muscular for my own personal health, I think also sculpting the body for her own personal physical preference comes with an added bonus that I really don't mind working for.

And that's all I have to say about that, simple question right?

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Berry what the heck happened to wearing your ovaries on the outside?  If you've pissed anyone off then uh, you've pissed them off.  The end and move on to some other discussion, I mean c'mon unless you were being offensive which from glazing these posts I highly doubt you have anything to worry about.

*Leaves and does something else now that he's answered the question*

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